Loved the story! The grammatical errors were annoying - use of pronouns, prepositions and tenses threw me off a bit towards the second half of the book. Error in name ie. Celeste = Asty and Leopold = Chaol? Proof reading is a must if you will be charging.
Has lots of actions. I love it
I mean, 90% of tower story's are the same
btw i recommend reading from another site, this one does not give the illustrations
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just search "City of Witches read online" and the first result would be a site with the first letter G
It was ok with parodies to 40k here and there but when it became 99% of the story it became a bad fanfic
Oh but the comment boys said they're different and not some sin demon?
So how powerful is shang compare to gravis?
What chapter did you make it to
No harem.
Mc has at most an interest towards 1 girl but it still only to that extent. Its obvious they will end up but its not the Japanese teen hormon filled kinda romance but a more normal one where the MC doesn't lose braincells for it.
I have nothing better to read currently so. . . sweet home Alabama (pray to the gods that the plot is at least good)
I just commented half an hour ago and here I am once again, I won't edit my original comment, but after reading some more chapters I am really really frustrated now, and I feel really sad cause I have invested so much time into reading this novel, I feel really bad for the mc as the author is focusing more on the humour than the mc's character development or strength. The mc's is portrayed as a dumbfu*k and is becoming more and more of a retard. It is saddening to read as this novel has lots of potential, I am at the brink of dropping this novel but will give it a last chance and continue reading cause I have invested a lot of time to it and I hope that it will improve.... Let's see what happens next....
Thank you for reading my rant and sorry if I have offended anyone, I am really frustrated that's all.
me too
she isnt even back yet