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Really interesting story. I like how its starting and im really looking forward to see whats next. If i were to complain about something it will probably be the lack of capital letters but its not that big of a deal. All in all i love it, keep writing!
If you don't want to read ”Vote for my book please.” thousands of times then I would not recommend this book to you but if you want to read it then go ahead you will enjoy.
Jolie histoire, je ne sais pas pour les autres moi j’aime bien le fait tu n‘es pas rentré directement dans le vif du sujet, j’aime bien prendre mon temps de comprendre et de voir où l’on va. J’écris en français parce que j’ai constaté que le français est votre langue maternelle. Et oui il y a certaines erreurs et fautes de frappes mais cela ne rend pas médiocre ton travail pour autant. Continue et je constate que tu t’améliores aussi au fur et à mesure. El Howie les jumeaux sont exceptionnels et il y a leur ami la que j’aime bien mais le nom m’a échappé. Celui qui parle beaucoup et qui se fout pas mal de qui sont ses amis. Bonne chance
I like the concept and you went slightly off of usual main classes for MC also I like how you didn't go with the reincarnated idea its good but hard to make good unless you plan your story well overall good chapter
la historia es muy buena e interesante
Daniel es un personaje excelente y humilde no le importe como dice la fama o dinero , supo salir a delante solo se dice el es un genio
omg there's only 16 chapters so far but Unholy-chan pulled me headfirst into a new world filled with fantasy, adventure and a healthy sprinkle of t+a (;
really hoping this story continues to be as incredible as it is at the start and i shall be adding this novel to my "F5 Sect" list ^^
i'm really looking forward to seeing Allen level up his love life with plenty of wild play while exploring uncharted territories of this new virtual reality world with his wives xD
i also badly want to see character growth both in vr and the real world. this type of genre is def one of my favorites!
So far so good.Continue with the good work author
This is really great for characters and the concept of being a Rouge rather than some sort of assassin in the normal sense of things. You have made it so these characters build off each other in some sort of way that make the Main character become better for his style of fighting and thinking to which is awesome and funny. Thank you.
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Hi! This is an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $50 advance by joining the contest.
Hi ,
This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Dragon Emperor, Martial God”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected]
, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.
It was a great pleasure to meet your story.
Sincerely
Tynan