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I READ AS MUCH OF THIS BOOK AS IT WOULD ALLOW ME AND IT SUCKED SO BAD THAT ITS A WASTE OF TIME!!
Why isnt this updating? Its such a great novel, better than 99 percent of the garbage on this website. Is someone gonna pick this up eventually, or is this donezo?
Paranormal dramedy. Fantasy Romance.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The story is ok. But there are .ny mistakes in the translations. Very obvious mistakes. Many typos and wrong words. I don't know what the editor is doing. Is he just reading the chapters for leisure and not doing his work?
There are 7 reviews from the same person and I was wondering how such a one-dimensional cliche novel can have such a good rating ...
Well,you have a new story don't get much about the world, the progression in storyline is pretty slow so you don't have much to talk about...Release is 7 chapters a week not 14 as it implies at the top and premium at chapter 40 so well if you don't want to spend 8 SS per chapter in wich you couldn't even read a whole scene then just don't read this novel isn't worth your time. Have a good day?I'm out.(well at least the Character design is a bit decent)
it's like these stories want to keep sucking China's d.ick like all the country's attacked China to plunder them then one dude from China who is an old toast ended it with one simple trick and the amount of of times it says how great China is actually scarry like do people in China just get fed propaganda
It's entertaining, but I have several problems with the main characters and dialogue.The main characters don't question anything. They suddenly transmigrated to another world and didn't question anything. They just said, "Oh, let's Dr. Stone this [thing]," and that's it. There are no hypotheses, internal monologues, questioning, or anything like that. Also, I feel like the characters don't try to change the world; they only try to make money, especially given how they act towards it. Apart from the blatant [racial discrimination] that Poul receives, they don't have opinions about anything else.They are like:Oh, look, the streets smell like [unpleasant thing that smells bad]. Well, it is what it is.Oh, look, people look at me as if I were an [intellectually challenged person] because I don't know these useless and overly complicated manners. Well, I guess it's my bad. I'll learn.Oh, look, races are separated by hair color and skin color. Well, I don't care, I'm not going to investigate it. I'll just work for 300 chapters to produce more air brakes.I understand that the characters have to adapt, and it's the smart choice, but I feel that the MCs don't have any conviction towards their past lives and 21th Century beliefs. They act as if they were commoners in that world that suddenly gained knowledge from another world, instead of actually being highly educated transmigrators from our era. They just accept things, and we aren't explained why they accept it. It's just weird, and it feels like they are empty. I don't know how to describe it.The dialogues are sometimes too specific or weirdly structured. Instead of something being explained through the narrator, the characters explain it. But sometimes, it's obviously structured so that we, as readers, can understand it, which makes the dialogue weird because nobody would talk like that. It's like they are reading a presentation/script.Also, the MCs act too respectful, let's better say "agreeable
good story, nice characters, would've loved to read morenice for passing time
it was consistent, it was well paced and well written. I would have liked a bit more epilogue and hearing how certain things ended but that wasn't really loose ends and more me not wanting to let a great story go. all things considered I really enjoyed it.
Very good!! This is my favourite sports novel ever. Author did a very good job. I have never read anything like it before. Has a dose of slice of life with a dose of the main plot of basketball.
like à lot of other chinese novels à lot of words to advance nowhere.
