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What happened to your chapters?! I was going to read them, but then I found 15+ chapters gone!
A very catchy and original cover page. I like your idea for the story.The plot is interesting, your characters are expressive. You're doing well!
There's hardly a story worth reading about 12 chapters in and there's no character or world development just horrendous word dumps on character gameplay elements that aren't even introduced well; the typical game breaking VR template with a kid who finds a magical ring that lets him hack into the game that his daddy wouldn't buy him and equip things IRL to flex in front of his classmates about how strong he is and not to judge a book by its cover. Combat is essentially my attributes were better> (system log exp rewards)Maybe next life you rabbits will see Mt Tai!
I'm obviously into videogames on a whole and this book got me fascinated.The whole background was well described and the story flow is intriguing to be honest..You've got good work, keep it up??
good book try to update more episodes regularly
So many things done wrong that it's not even funny.9 Chapters were all I could handle of this "literary masterpiece".Generic antagonist whose sole purpose is to spout lines just to see what makes you cringe the hardest.Generic pretty independent love interest who needs to be saved by MC at every turn despite being hailed as a great prodigy.Generic Mentally handicapped MC who does not understand the world he is or what an economy of product is, Sells top quality products for pennies while complaining about how broke he is, Gets walked over by just about everyone in the novel, becomes a simp when interacting with a girls.The idea of the book was quite interesting unfortunately execution leaves much to be desired.
The symposis doesnt do this novel justice. I didnt think this idea could he exacuted but He builds a soLid fUndation. This novel definitely has the potential to push the rankings??????
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I am in love with this book, the plot , the authors ability to build up the characters is just superb....what a fascinating story.this cjdnxakmdnxj
This is a good novel, I daresay! If you're not willing to go through at least 80 chapters then don't bother leaving a sh*tty review! The plot is good, the comedy is great, but there is only one thing I am a bit concerned about. That is - I hope this novel doesn't have any of those racist 'nationalism' crap that keeps popping up every now and then on other novels.
Don't waste your time with this story. All the low ratings and comments are true. Wish I had read them first.The story starts with an interesting premise but by the fourth reincarnation, the author runs out of ideas and the deduction system in the title disappears. The plot is messy and details are missing. It just jumps randomly like it was written by an old chatbot. ChatGPT would have done a much better job.The first 2 reincarantions take up 48 chapters, the 3rd runs from chapter 57 to 117, but the 4th runs from 120 to 662.The 4th reincarnation forgets the MC is suppose to do things to earn points. About half way through, the author starts writing a second story with another MC that barely intersects with the main story. After that the MC gets OP and ascends to the next level at which point the author or the translator has skipped so many details the story is garbage. Towards the end, the MC throws himself into the reincarnation cycle of that world instead of returning to his own and goes off on a 5th reincarnation cycle.The 5th is a standard Wuxia trope with crippled young master dumped by finance.
