though the English needs work... the characters are well portrayed, you can truly feel there emotion, and the pace of the story is not fast nor slow, just right...**. overall I like the story
It's a really good story that follows the idea of jumping back in time. Even though it's a common novel idea, the author still manages to draw you into the world. The itemization and quests along with the fame system are well balanced and believable. The writing of the environment also paints a grand picture of the game in your mind.The only thing I would note is that it has a slow start to the story, taking around seven chapters before you even get into the time jump. So if you can stick around for that then you're in for a good ride!
Just rating my own stuff. I have got a Story in my head which I know , it’s gonna be good . It is a story about lazy normal **** doing everything he can so be lazy in his later years. It’s mainly focused on Character development and stuff which I wished I could learn at School like how to earn Money and so on. If you can connect to this vibe , this story is definitely for you. Even if you can’t connect to it, just try. You might just find it interesting.
wah this is cool man, loved it. please keep updating. very eager to read. the beginning is good. let's hope this comes out well. do well and you're di great
I would give 5/5. The characters seems to have life and i could imagine all that happened in that prologue. I would like to give the author all the best for upcoming chapters.
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I really like the base idea of the novel. But there is a large time skip directly after meeting the gods. the first war is done and we hop into a school ark, and sadly, we have very strong hints of a very obvious harem protagonist. but overall, it's a good novel
Horny, trashy mc? ✔1000 yo retard with brain like sieve ✔ sad past ✔deserves everything that comes his way? ✔Might have changed, I couldn't deal with this bs any longer. (11th chapter)1st ever review, which is equally as bad as this novel.P.S. Author, I suggest reading couple of books about world building and actually thinking before describing characters. You've written about how mc is 1000 yo, yet behaves like a brat. I bet his 79 points in intelligence is probably his iq (His physical stats are like 0.6). He hates his family, even tho he behaves equally as bad towards other human beings.
I like the story!.... It's kinda similar to arifureta, the theme is a bit alike but this has more possibilities, i'm quite intrigue with the hidden potential of the cook and librarian job.... I hope for you to continue updating this Novel........
A hidden gem. Such an underrated novel that is written so marvelously that I honestly can’t compare it to any cultivation story before this. It cannot be compared. It’s even more amazing to me because it’s absolutely FREE to read.Writing Quality - Amazing. Can’t find any fault at all. The details makes me feel like I’m in the world itself, it explains so much and it doesn’t feel like you’re being thrown into a big information dump and having to figure it out for yourself. Everything is explained simple and actually easy to follow regarding cultivation and the different teachings.Story Development - It’s a slow paced story, hard to find especially when it’s done THIS well. And the slow burn romance works with the story development to a T. It’s definitely my cup of tea but of course if you’re more into the fast paced element packed with action then it’s probably not to your preference. The minimal action we do get is well written too (read up to ch.160 so can’t really say if there is a lot more action after this). Character Design - All the characters have their own personalities, opinions, flaws, talents, and designed perfectly in their role for the story. Leon (MC) is shy, weak, naive, and has a speech impediment. Jin Li (ML) is your Tsundere, arrogant, oblivious, yet undeniably strong young master who does whatever he wants and pulls Leon around. He can be cold and harsh with his words but he isn’t heartless nor is he blinded by his social status to look down on the poor. There are so many more relatable and likable characters (and of course those who are created to be unlikable).World Building - There is SO MUCH to learn and slowly unravels just a bit more as the story progresses. There’s unique beasts and creatures, herbs for many things, and so much more. It’s really amazing how much imagination the author has and to be able to incorporate this in the story is actually the hardest thing to do.TLDR; A slow paced, slowburn romance that is worth the read. Detailed and marvelously written cultivation story on two precious boys falling in love in an unfair world.
One of the best, or at least in the top 3 properly written story with proper plot and cool interesting characters on this site.10/10 MC couple, that actually make sense no BS and proper progression, growth, and plot that flow and raises the story.The beginning is a little, slow, but as you continue on, it adds these amazing fights, and cool cultivation events and techniques. The world changes so much its becomes so interesting.Sadly we don't know why its stop updating, like MAM, and we can only pray it comes back.That said still worth the votes, and to read the current chapters.
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