LONGLINPtB

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The plot had potential, but it was written pretty badly. They don't elaborate at all, and it skips around a lot. I got confused a lot. Characters were brought into the story randomly, so they had no background. The world background was confusing as well, because it started with the zombie apocalypse, but after a while, she was a demon and there were no zombies.