LONGLINPtB
I've only skimmed it because the story is vague and undescriptive so take this review with a grain of salt, the only reason i am even doing this review is because the author has seemed to confused inspiration and plagerisim, you see if i took the entire plot of the first 10 movies in the marvel universe then changed up some names, slapped it onto webnovel, then started to write a unique story nothing would change. and i saw in a comment that webnovel would remove any novels that plagerise, which is super weird becaue they themselves plagerise for example ED the rights to translate it were bought straight from the author on wuxiaworld yet here it is on this website with a "dropped" status i wonder why, if that's not good enough for you look at 60-80 percent of all the novels in the whats next section pretty much all of them are ripped from Chinese websites, can you guess what those Chinese websites do most of the time. also a side note you should probably stop making stories then immediately dropping it.
We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give, never gonna give(Give you up)We've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye
Author review: Don't expect much from this novel, I don't really plan to make it long or anything, but you can rest assured that the grammar will be good throughout.
Good work keep it up. The story is well described and told. With that, it was splendid, I can say that the author has potential to do more and even put more effort to this. The plot is also steadily building up and I am hooked on every bit of it. I the writing quality is also lit!. Kudos for the Kobe well done. I am anticipating more?
primitive workd where protagonist uses his knowledge of the modern world (guessing that’s his golden finger) to establish a tribe. also worships an ancient vine that gives em power in exchange for offerings.
So far so good, keep up the good work.Epic. But fate do be lookin at him suspiciously bad.
Great book, you readers should defo give it a chance, it won’t fail to impress
Great novel, enjoyed it a lot, hope it gets Picked.
I will first tell you that this novel has high comedic element , is about a guy who fells that he is ordinary person but the people around him don't think so.Con:1: upto chapter300 no clear story plot goal2: repeative scenario (upto chapter 200) after that it has unique linear growth in story3: high content about food (pro for food lover)Pros:1: comedy2: overpowered MC but not too undesirable and plot is not to stupid3: low arrogant character4: good story baground and world plotting5: smooth transition in plot with no goal to a definite goalIt's too funny and good story so do try
While the *** is good, it's really the story that keeps me coming back to this book. It always leaves me with a feeling of wanting to read just a few more chapters. Good work author, and thank you for this enjoyable read.
Reading this novel like enjoying a nice slow dance ? Two geniuses working together and slowly coming closer together. The author is generous by giving us as much factual info as possible while keeping the read fun. Highly recommended??????????
another good book on transmigration and cultivation. but it had different concept which is fun to read, Mc Ku Lo is a caring person as he was still worried about his sister, waiting to be further updates. good work author
