Brother, I understand the concept of 'Heaven and Earth', but these Chinese authors using this term in every single chapter. I am criticizing the choice of words.
Okay, I will give an example - Author said- "A Vision of Ancient Phoenix soaring into nine heavens appeared." ... How the hell am I supposed to imagine that?
So, I'm saying he doesn't have to be so stubborn, right? He could use normal and simple terms. So that we don't have to read the same sentence over and over again in single chapter.
bro why do they translate it 2 times its so annoying. do they stop translate 2 times or do they do it for the rest of the series.
Very good novel here
O prota deveria tê-la matado há muitos capítulos atrás
Al-Raya is good for entertainment and funny, different from other novels. If you want a new flavor, read it I really liked it It's a novel for laughter, don't care about the negative reviews, keep going
Although its a little early to review a story but still wanted to do it because I found it a little bit interesting...
Most of the people saying it wasn't there type of book at first but l found it pretty interesting and cool...
The story development and world background is quite nice and decent...
All the best author... Hope u will finish writing this awesome story...
Ok. Ch: 30 and it's really an enjoyable read so far. The character development was a little abrupt at the beginning but author managed to smooth things out. Keep going. Nice book.
Amazing great but I think you should start with a few external creatures to reach the planet. Something like a space worm and then he can start cultivating creatures from space even if they are only 4th to 5th realm
The mc turned evil too quick. It said humanoid not only humans so ogres goblins and other card summons could have worked.
what happened after the chapter of night forest? it starts going on about an haoshoku system and doesn't really follow the original story. was there an error of updating a chapter in the wrong novel
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I don't know about other people but I had a bit of a hard time following at the beginning but I attribute that more to myself then your writing. Your description was vivid but dialog made me question weather an actual gamer would talk the way you wrote. Your style made it seem like they treated the game like the real world to much. Overall it was a decent read