Why is this book not completed!!?
There is seriously something wrong here. I can feel it.
the first quarter is yeah, then it gets worse but you think that its a trough and that the plot picks back up, and by the time you realize its a nosedive you are too invested and will spite read it and HATE the incredibly scuffed ending
The translation is abysmal. I'm not ungrateful by nature, and I can tolerate some subpar translations that others might overlook. But this... it's practically unreadable. I skimmed through, and I估计至少看了三十多章内容混乱的唠叨。即便到了第九十二章，我也因为糟糕的翻译而跳过一大段。这让我费力地试图连贯故事，章节的不连贯程度几乎让人头疼。我并不是说这是最差的翻译，但它确实相当糟糕。
我甚至不确定为何要在这里抱怨，因为中文翻译的同人小说在角色一致性上并不出名，但...拜托！我可以接受一些明显的中国式陈词滥调，比如“白胡子大海之王，我将永远记住这份仇恨！”或者那些充斥在中文小说中的“面子”问题。但是，这个译本中角色行为与原著严重不符，简直让我内心抓狂。不，阿卡伊努并不是一个长着人形的幼儿。尽管他在原作中愤怒且无情，但他绝不是一受挫折就耍性子的小孩。
“哇！森古道爸爸为什么不提名我当海军元帅，我很生气！！”阿卡伊努嘟囔着，怨恨的目光直射森古道的背影。他的眼睛有些湿润，心中充满了背叛感，有一部分他真想起身掐死这家伙。但他还是克制住了。拿起他的奶嘴，他开始吮吸，直到情绪稍微平复，继续直播。
那其实并不是故事的一部分，但这就是我从这部同人小说中感受到的氛围。主要是阿卡伊努，但如果我说几乎所有在《海贼王》正文中被定义为反派的角色都存在这种问题，只是程度不同，那就太夸张了。
我也要吐槽主角。他存在的意义何在？每次阅读这些名为“（某动漫名）广播”的同人小说时，这个问题不断在我脑海中回荡。他只是一个空壳，除了占据空间，没有任何实际作用。如果换成自动系统或人工智能进行直播和提问，故事完全不会有影响。不，等等，那样会更好。至少不会出现他自诩中立，却在关键时刻插手，显得极其刻意的情节。
I'm incredibly eager to share my thoughts because after reading the released chapter on NovelUpdates, I couldn't resist diving ahead. My assessment? A solid 5 out of 5 stars. As an avid reader of reincarnation and transmigration stories, this tale holds a deeper meaning. Our protagonist, after defeating the demon king and reincarnating, has a significant mission to fulfill in this world. It's not just about avoiding the heroines' attempts to eliminate him; I might have hinted at it, though.
Although labeled as "psychological," I believe the story will also delve into tragedy and drama, given how the characters reveal more than meets the eye. However, my understanding of their backgrounds is limited due to the ongoing translation from Korean to English.
Nonetheless, I highly recommend giving this story a chance. The plot progresses steadily, and the dynamic main character, along with the intriguing heroines, initially piqued my interest. So, give it a go – you won't be disappointed!
Primarily, the novel is indeed well-crafted, with commendable translation, grammar, and storytelling. However, it's the protagonist's constant state of vulnerability that bothers me – he's portrayed as an ICU patient, bleeding and gravely ill throughout each chapter. The surrounding female characters' reactions, whether guilt or resentment, only serve to exacerbate the gloomy atmosphere. It's akin to witnessing a fish struggling helplessly out of its element, leading to a deeply disheartening reading experience.
Idk man. I saw some comments raving about this novel so I gave it a chance. 50+ chapters in, I can’t continue. Compared to other magic / magus/magic novels this MC seems dense and edgy with a lot of plot convenience. Also, never really liked MC’s shouting out their spells to cast them.
Unless someone wishes to claim that this novel improves by a whole lot, (which doesn’t seem to be the case gauging off of the more critical reviews,) I’m dropping this novel.
Most of the time I don't even read the tags, just the synopsis, and I was looking for one in the style of Anthony from Chrysalis
older love interest? reverse rape? bdsm? count me in! ??
Fleeting time is so annoying, i like customer service number 94 than him!!!
Based from the summary alone I would say this is trash
The ending was a little sudden but nonetheless funny and felt true to their unusual and random personalities. At least that’s my take for Yuri lol