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The story is awesome!!!!!!!But can you tell me the stability of the updates. Also i think you should change the name to kingdom building instead of cooking. Keep up the good work>_<
going to bed now I have to go ? my room and you r going to be a little bit of a little ?? and I don't want too much to do with it you can
At first, the novel is great. The MC makes wise decisions and shows great plans, even though he plays around. And seriously, I was expecting a great read due to the first chapters. But the later chapters was too disappointing. The story became slow-paced. And the MC keeps playing around. It feels like thee's really nothing happening in the story.
slow updates and chapters too short, other than that a good concept but the characters feel too unnatural like in this 2 last chapters the "Boss" accepted the "SYSTEM" way too easily (I'M NOT NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER SO PLEASE PARDON MY MISTAKES)
You should first finish your other novels and then start for the new one.And please update tales of demons and gods daily if you want to finish it, if not then announce it as dropped.
Good one......I don't have any other things to say......cFCcFFF. VFFFfFfjfnnfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjnfjfjF.f.f.f.f.f.c.c.c.c.f.f.f..fWHY 140 LETTERS??
Good novel it has handsome mc , harem and dual cultivation the best thing you find in novels ????????????????????????????
I Eat Tomatoes is a veteran and it really shows, this is a cultivation novel that has something so many mediocre novels lack. A world where Common sense exists. Antagonists and secondary Characters aren't completely suicidal and respect the mc's strength, the MC doesn't pointlessly annoy or provoke people and actually carefully conceals his strength. Best of all it doesn't drag out what the audience wants endlessly, the couple get married happily without taking thousands of chapters, the mc has reasonable strength from the start, the revenge that drove the mc has been partially achieved and so much more. This is a novel with incredible potential. looking forward to the future
Booooooooooooooooooooo.....!!!!My previous review get blocked. When costumer complaining you should hear and do improvement, not putting duck tape in their mouth. Reduce the stone price and add ad's instead (#•∆•)/
Gosh, It’s so difficult to find quality stories on this site and finding quality villain stories where the mc is actually psychotic is even more arduous. The mc in this story has been placed in a perfect place to allow him to continue being a villain and he’s even introduced to other ‘predators’. The plot is great and I’m actually really happy he kills just because he likes seeing people below him instead of a childhood trauma or something. Anyways, so far, the story is spectacular and I bet it will continue to be after the author recovers from their hiatus. Also, just wanna say that the gore is amazing and the author actually goes into what he’s doing instead of just being like “he cut off his head and felt amazing” or something of the like.
