Love this Wish it would update more than once a week.
just had to leave a review thanks mate and sorry
who's the writer gives herself a review? meee?
Nice story of revenge and rebirth and the flow is good ?
i love the way the writer start with the creation of the power system I am hoping for more world creation, and I am sure he/she won't disappoint
If I had to describe this novel in one word, it would be 'alright'. The overall plot of the novel is interesting. It certainly isn't new, but I'm not one to hope every novel I read is a brand new, genius idea. The grammar is off in places, but its isn't unreadable.My main gripe would be the character interactions. It was only 4 chapters in when we ran into our first 'arrogant young master' character, and much of the 15 chapters I read was just recycling some variation of "FL is way too beautiful and amazing," "ML is useless and plain and doesn't belong with her." The MC somehow gets a subpar score on the entrance exam (what was on the test still hasn't been explained), but has overwhelming power than expected for his age. There's a blatant disregard for any female's opinions (no matter their school rank or personal power). And bot the ML and FL are content to get walked all over so that they can 'live peacefully as a couple' while doing nothing preventative to help ensure that future. I'm sure at some point the ML is going to show off his power in a ridiculous way, and then everyone will fawn over him at that time. It's all of the usual things you would find in an average xanxia novel. I think it's done a bit excessively in this novel, hence the low rating. It becomes a bit of a slog to read through
Hi! Author here.If you have anything to say about my work, critique it freely as that's what I'm looking for in my growth as an author. It will also be mirrored in Valor's adventure as he tries to obtain his dreams.
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Hi my name is Brandon gould I am responding to the review swap. I reviewed your book and I think it is a very good book and you should write more of it
I sorted have an higher expectations but got squash soon after...nice Grammer thou....with no mistakes after reviewing it again don't know if author got sloppy after the chapter I read.all in allit's all good on specific places except some places
The novel is a sequel of World Domination System. You should really read the prequel since it has this brilliant writing and world background with great characters and nice fights. You could manage to start from this sequel tho. I really like what the author did here with this new start in a new whole continent, Mc is not too overpowered which is cool; the system and the power levels of this world are well explained and made. I wish the author could come back and hope he's fine since the last update was almost 3 months ago.
The plot is interesting. The characters' interactions are well made and coherent with how the relation between male and female are in that world. I want to know more about the other empires/power and if any man is trying to build a revolution army or something like that with what happens to them when they lose the war.