Majorr plothole: No one among the characters in the novel is asking why "Ross is hunting pirates". I mean, come on, I know that he looks at bounty posters for his system, but his crewmates don't. No one ever asked why he keeps on hunting pirates. Even the Marines don't have the curiosity. Ross is clearly a transmigrator, that means, his past life such as childhood came from earth. He has ''no' past in the world of one piece aside from being known as a pirate hunter. I just find it wasteful that the money in his bounty hunts cannot be claimed. Sheeesh... Though, he explicitly made his former cp members-now subordinates to retrieve it for him, I just feel that their is a lack of flavor to Ross's character. I wish for more fillers, I think it would be entertaining if his crewmates overthink of his past hehe...
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So uh, hey. Author here. This novel isn't exactly the most popular, unfortunately, but what can you do.So to tell a more real take on the story, it is a little bit light on the actions scenes and the like (Though it is in there somewhat). Instead, most of the content is about people talking to each other and how their relationship gradually progresses.This story is actually somewhat of a remake of my very first novel, "This Clueless Hero". It was essentially about someone with depression, and their life as they wallow through it. However, this story is different in that the main character has already gotten over their depression. As you go through the story, you see how it still affects him even afterwards, and how he sees the world.Though it comes off as goofy, that's mostly just so that things don't get too heavy. The main character is, all things considered, pretty weak compared to the rest. Instead, he gets through things using his words, whether callously or amicably.This isn't a light read, by any means, since most of the story is about its development. But if that doesn't sound too bad to you, then maybe you would enjoy it....Also, this totally isn't a shameless five-star review, what?
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in all honesty I expected more from this novel. author is decently skilled in writing so reading chapter after chapter is a pleasure but. And here comes problems, MC is a kid, so he is inexperienced, lacking a skill to handle both fighting situations and daily decisions, which won't be a problem if not for a slow progress. he is overly reliant on his Arcana, which is a source of power unique for every awakened person and since the stronger Arcana the more intelligent it is, he is just played by it like a full and beeing manipulated. that's a main reason why I dropped this novel, this and idea of time travel which honestly was introduced too early into a story and created a massive mess. So basically is hard to enjoy reading about this puppet like MC. For a plus, side character are nicely written and they ve got a decent amount of time, but they just can't carry thus story alone.
This is a hidden gem the plotline is one of the best out of basketball novels and the novel itself can be addicting to read and is very good. I love how the mc acts and its a small surprise with his height. The only thing I can really "complain" about is maybe not as long time skips even though the author used it in a very good way. I wish the chaps were longer and more chaps in general but I won't complain. Keep up the good work author and I pray to God that you will continue this story thank you.???
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was so exciting that it almost made me lose track of time. maybe there are many things that I understand a little, but that certainly doesn't stop me from reading. because one thing is certain in this story is.. where there's action, that's where the tension and twists of curiosity occur. keep up, authors ??
Im giving this three stars because i wish the author would lengethen the novel instead of this because half the novel is just the mc warming up to the idea of banging his mom we only get lemons at the final volume i wish they expanded it i hope you can author
I don’t know if its just the earlier chapters but the way he talks is not refined for the thousands of lifes he lived and he didnt bother researching cultivation or any so called Immortal things in any of his life times or trying to break the cycle great idea poorly implemented
I think the story needs a lot of work in many different area and isn't very interesting. I wouldn't recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
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