preciouspeter
Different from synopsis. This is a live stream novel of a priest. I repeat this is a LIVESTREAM novel. Till now he doesn't get holy light/ability to talk to animals/holy sword!
right away I will say this story has decent world-building and ok story development. but that's it. first of all, reading the first 15 or so chapters is like rubbing sandpaper on your eyes and is the visual equivalent of nails on a chalkboard. excruciatingly slow start, repeating segments that don't add anything, and a general lack of plot development outside of typical world building combines with machine translation quality English to create a unique abomination. to top it off it's maddening that a story can have such decent world-building while making a character so empty I question if the story even needs them. I will attempt to read the remaining chapters while it's free, but genuinely don't think I can. this novel isn't the worst thing ( that goes to a novel that suddenly became one-piece fanfic at chapter 85ish) but I cannot stress enough how mediocre at best this is.
A brilliant usage of fantasy elements to bring projections and parallels to the real world, providing food for thought about the dark nature of Human beings while shedding light on deep philosophical questions.
Beaware, you are up for a rollercoaster ride of emotions.
Once you start reading you get hooked immediately. Highly recommended masterpiece.
Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book.First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters.Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly.I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird.Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement.What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost. Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement.Thank you .
Nope, leaving 1 star so people aren't mislead into actually trying to read this. Grammar is really bad...
A really good novel!A xianxia MC who surprisingly thinks!
Amazing story, this actually cured my cancer and my dead mother was revived from the grave the moment I opened the page. The luck of the gamer was transported to me, I won the lottery shortly after too frfr
The only pro is that the MC is OP and has a good base to start from.As for the cons:1> Author tried to put in mystery and failed miserably ( too much of anything just gets annoying and bad ).2> The MC is a Naive snob who doesn't know the value of anything. He has been protected his whole life so doesn't even know slums exist and is waaay too idealistic.3> The only ambition he has is to 'make his father proud' which is quite honestly just downright sad as it seems his entire character has been molded to present him as a good prince.4> People don't want to start a war against his father and yet they discuss war to take control of Julius???????????
TBH I am not really a fan of a dark fantasy story, heck I even wanted to drop it at the early chapters but I read till the latest chapter and I was glad because I almost missed gold.Note : try to read till chap 60 before dropping, because the story became enjoyable at that chapter.
I like the storyline and how the practioner gradually proceeds towards achieving his growth in realms. LONG TAO is a great character.I would recommend all to read this
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So far so good! I can't wait to read more of it! Carry on releasing author! 100% RECOMMEND! damn it word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
