This is my first web novel so don't expect anything as great as other big novels. Please don't leave bad ratings, instead, comment on what you dislike about the story.
The story's writing quality is pretty good, with a solid premise. The only problem is that the fact that the plot line doesn't really have any tension and it causes the story to be very boring and a little difficult to read.
So far so good. The writting is consistant and the character is interesting. I cannot wait for more!The only thing that is weird iS that the autors name is 9 dragons and The MC only has 7!?
Great story..felt as if I know the character..his feelings as if it were of someone I know close enough.. waiting for more..hope soon enough I get read and enjoy more...
Great novel, highly recommended. Interesting cultivation system based literally around the heart. Even alchemy is done in the heart. MC is a world class cardiologist who transfers worlds, great in that he doesn't instantly lose his modern world sensibilities and at least in the first 60 chapters tries to stick to them and his oaths as a doctor. Really interesting.
the story is developing nicely i like the family side cant wait for some family shenanigans which i think would be nice since its a nice spin on this story genre which you dont see often the story has ben good so far hope it continues
