I wish author would focus on this novel more............................................................................................
I started reading but found it difficult due to the words not being used or structured right, you can get the jist of what your trying to say in it but it is difficult to read the English, I hope you can reread and fix them or get someone who can proof read your work before hand might help.
The author as a strong, direct writing style. The hero is likeable and his potential role helping NPCs is interesting. At chapter 14 some inconsistencies seem to be popping up and the momentum is slowing. I guess balancing the romance and the larger story about the NPCs is tricky.
More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,More chapters,
COME BACK PLS ! THIS NOVEL IS A WAY TO GOOD TO BE DROPPED ???
Every CN cliche you can think of is in here. It has everything from baseless face slapping to the useless female following MC. If you want to read something, save yourself the migraine and read something else
Good story.................Very excited to read more..............Good luck author and I hope you finish the story............................................................................................................................
The story is interesting as the MC is dedicated & persistent in leveling his skill.The MC also learn skill fast through the system.Their parents are also funny and lovable as whatever the MC did is lovable to them.
Firstly I just binged read up to chapter 55 and I must say thank you as I am enjoying this story. The lack of seriously over used cliches and nipple twisting plot turns. Also just the overall plot direction being generally unguessable is worth the read. I have read a lot of stories and this one I must say have the potential to be in my top ten that I would recommend and reread when I want to enjoy the story all over again.
This is just so hilarious! This is a great novel! I really enjoyed reading it! Thanking the author for his hardwork! Hope to see more in the future!
Ima be honest just doing my daily stuff to get more spirit stones..............................................................................
It's a great story, I love to read it. Super!