This would be the best story..... If the mc's sidekick was the actual mc. Lets see all the things fatty has Girls(but not too much of a horndog) ✔Power ✔Talent ✔Good friends ✔Powerful backer ✔Good sect that treats him like family ✔Moral character ✔A sect that dorsn't promote racism!!!!! (Yes, it is the first and only) ✔No bs powerups ✔What the actual f*ck lol, listing this makes you realize how bs this story is. The biggest problem is mc's 'girlfriend' who he confessed to, she accepted and then didn't really care about it and then liked mc for one chapter and then got ALL of her memories wiped. Yes ALL of them including memories of mc. And for some stupid ass reason he doesn't like the girls who have stuck around with him, helped him, and genuinely love him for who he is.. Can we just get a replacement pls thanks
The story has a cool premise and the system seems unique as well. The author seems to have done a lot of research regarding guns and the like, so good job, author! One thing I have to say though is that the story needs some proofreading and some extra details. The plot seems to go a bit too fast; it would be better if it was slowed down a bit.Good luck author! :)
Haha nice novel , antihero mc and also overpowered and also can steal abilities ........that all I want in any novel gonna read it ....I really hate Chinese writers who don't give their mc unique abilities now it is in this novel so I am reading it.Well story is quite good I personally like the writing style of MLB which simple and fluent not like some writers who use uncommon english words.
The plot is extremely predictable and for me is boring in every way. Just reading this made me wanna puke, the characters are no joke retarded and overall this **** is hella cliche
Good
Whenever the MC makes a choice between two decisions, strangely I can't read them. Thank you to those who commented what they were supposed to say in the comments for those who couldn't read them. If you're wondering what I'm talking about, just read and you'll find out. Or hopefully, they'll have fixed that the time you read this review.MC rerolls his cultivation potential until he gets top notch potential. He then joins a sect, goes on the down low and occasionally does a few high profile things while still trying to be low-key. Some people have also commented that he's stupid sometimes, but so what? Does the MC have to be perfect to enjoy the story?The novel isn't bad. The MC uses a sword, so if you have some strange prejudice against swords (this has barely any impact on the plot anyway), you can skip it. Otherwise, if you really can't find anything better, this novel is fine to read until the very end.
I love it! I am used to stories where protagonist is in novel world and feel they have to follow the plot, but in this story the villain does whatever he wants. I absolutely love this novel that I kept rereading for days. Can't wait for more chapters. Thank you author!
Only the synopsis caught my eye, I wonder what this story will turn up.
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23 chapters 7/19/23. So far very good story! Keep the updates coming regularly! Can’t wait to see how their story ends!!
There are so many layers to unpack in this chapter that I barely know where to start. Let me just pick one thread and follow it. The white coat. Fang Yuan puts it on and immediately feels hotter. This is not an accident of writing — it's the first symbolic moment of her professional identity. The white coat represents everything she's trained for, everything she chose when she decided to study medicine. But it also represents the weight of expectation, the institutional authority she now carries, and the physical discomfort of stepping into a role that's larger than her. Then there's the ration coupon. Two jin of meat. In a world where the state controls distribution, the coupon is a tiny piece of paper that determines whether a family eats well or barely survives. It's a symbol of the system that both sustains and constrains these people. Fang Yuan smiles until her eyes narrow into crescents when she receives it — this is genuine joy, the kind that comes from knowing you've provided something tangible for your family. But it's also a reminder that her salary, her status, her entire position as a doctor, is mediated through a bureaucratic apparatus that could just as easily withhold it. The portrait of the Great Leader on Director Chen's wall is another symbol that does heavy lifting. It's not just set dressing — it's the ideological framework against which every decision in this hospital is measured. "Serve the People Wholeheartedly" isn't just a slogan on the outer wall; it's the standard by which Director Lin judges himself and everyone else. When he says the hospital exists for the people, he's not being poetic. He's quoting the wall. And the bicycle — Director Lin arrives on a black Forever bicycle, the most common bicycle in China, the symbol of ordinary dignity. He doesn't arrive in a car. He parks it, walks over to help an old farmer, and becomes the moral center of the story. The bicycle is his equalizer. It says: I am one of you, and I will ride back to you. The production team certificate of financial hardship that Director Lin proposes — this is perhaps the most important symbol. It's a piece of paper that transforms a moral obligation into an administrative procedure. The system can accommodate compassion, but only if it's documented, certified, and routed through the proper channels. Director Lin knows this. That's why he doesn't just declare that the hospital will treat Liang Youtian — he immediately starts thinking about the paperwork.
great book