Level 10 in Ep 40. This story is too slow peaced and I think the reason is because author want to make Ep no higher. Mc is just an ordinary person who got a system by luck. Even after he got a system, he is still ordinary. Dont get me wrong, he skills has potential just that He is not someone who is keep trying to get stronger. So, what do he do? He saves everyone he see and makes meal for them. You will also see a lot of information dump and he shows differences POV just to make the ep longer. After saving the first girl and just by eating meal together, he wants to kiss the girl when he is leaving. I have read a lot of novels and Mc in dire situation is where he do something impossible or in very extreme situations. Here? you will see a lot of almost death situations because The author wants to show character development. And He was saved by so call 'Plot Armor'. The novel is funny in so many way. I gave 3 stars because all authors should at least get it. Not because it is to my liking.
como é apenas o primeiro capitulo por enquanto não dá para ter ideia dos updates então deixei em 3 estrelas, a qualidade da escrita em um quesito narrativo falha um pouco em alguns pontos, os personagens são promissores e a historia tambem, o mundo ainda não tá muito explicado mais isso é normal para um primeiro capitulo, deve melhorar nos proximos eu imagino.
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I started reading this novel as an exchange in reviews. I'm certainly glad I took the time, the story is interesting even if the amount of chapters leaves me wanting more. The quality and english used is of superb calibre and I must applaud both the writer and his editor for that. The characters show a good build-up in character although there is a lack of depth, yet this is mostly due to the lack of current chapters. The world building is interesting and leaves one wondering what the future will hold for this fic. I will update this review sometime in the future when There are more chapters for me to feast my eyes on.For now I would advise people to read the fiction, It is worth your time!
The MC's shamelessness knows no bounds and thanks to his unique character, I am in love with the story. Everything about it so far, screams mystery and I am looking forward to unraveling more. Keep up the good work author.
I really have a strong dislike for super naive characters. This is the very definition of that, why would you blabber all your secrets knowing what humans are capable of. This character acts like they are incapable of thinking unless they are in some kind of trouble. The writing and grammar was good, the character is what threw me off from continuing Volume 2
It really isn’t that bad compared to other major racist and nationalistic novels. The only thing the novel that is bad is that Japan has poor security. Like have you seen the mythological something gene novel. Other than that the novel seems pretty interesting ofc 40 chapters isnt enough to tell if its good or not
bro this author is just, sigh, y'all should go read the novel omg it's good bro like c'mon. the author tries their best so go and leave comments and a review
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