Nice story with a bit of grammar mistakes, pretty good plot progress so far with a bit of fillers you might say, but it's still entertaining.
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chapter 1, paragraph 9, it has messed up perspective.
so for those that are sensitive about it (like me), stay away.
filler filler
This is great disappointment for me ...the concept was unique on clishe setting but I hoped it was interesting but there so many dumb action by mc and plot holes and the rich guys who appear too dumb gave my brain migran and seriously lowered my iq ... translation deppects were one of main attraction..as many name were wrong and even chapter 36 and 37 are same
I see there this is going, a D&D fantasy world where everyone calls the protagonist by his Chinese name, a dumb system awakening and mc who gets laid in the first chapter on a woman we barely know anything about. Great character design and plot development, I am focking dropping this.
Also thank you very much WebNovel for dropping Warlock Apprentice this week and picking up this peace of idiotic wishfulfilment crap.
Its pretty unique. Elf time
Great read, well worth the time. Fast paced, action story right out of the gate! Loved the card tricks! Characters are likeable. Great use of description whilst continuing the flow of the story. Everything was geared towards that fast pace set in the beginning with a great hook.
Author should really delete these 2-3 star spam reviews with no actual review in them, it lowers the rating despite how many people enjoy the novel.
Those who’ve made critic comments make fair points, if you somehow get to my review first you should take them into consideration.
Always remember : if you dont like the novel then you can always leave it
This is also a personal guideline, any novel below 4.5 is an easy pass
This is so good but it is dropped? Why? TAT I really like the way the author describing the relationship. It is refreshing seeing both perspective from two people who are clearly into each others and know exactly what they wanted.
Anyway, here is 5* from me.
I am enjoying reading this book. The story has been quite an emotional rollercoaster for me, and it has been a fascinating journey. The suspense and the consecutive plot twists have kept me on the edge of my seat, and I am thoroughly impressed with the pacing and characterization. Overall, everything about this book is absolutely amazing, and I am completely hooked.
Yes, I would suggest reading this LN. There is no Nationalism going on in this LN as these people keep freaking out about. The only time that you could even claim nationalism was when 2 governments sent 2 scout teams to work together on the other side of the portals that just opened up. The 1st team comes from a nation that doesn't even exist in our reality and only exists in the LN. The 2nd team comes from the same country as the MC. They ran into the MC, on the other side of the portal, and thought that the MC had fallen through a portal by mistake. Team 2 wanted to have the MC come with them so that they could protect him. Team 1 said NO because he would be a burden because he was to weak and they had a mission to complete and because the MC wasn't the only non-military person who had wandered into the portals that would end up being to weak to be there. Please remember that Team 1 does have their own countries agendas to think about. So does team 2. In the end the MC said no thanks and left to do stuff on his own. Later the MC saw them again and the 2 teams were running away from a POWERFUL monster and team 1 was using team 2 as their scape goats. That was all there was to this supposed Nationalism that these people are freaking out about.
Exactly what I'm searching for. The main character's determination is nice, not stopping to get his family members. And as long as you continue, this gonna be good.