I will stop reading this book ,if the male lead touch the slut.
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Shaping up to be a good story. Don't let any mean comments get you down as you continue to write. Over time, everything will fall into place.
My only advice is trying to not make the MC too overpowered too fast, or the side characters too mindless or uninteresting.
All in all, keep up the good work
Ever wonder why in almost all xianxia novels there seems to be only one ethnic group or skin color amongst humans (A.K.A everybody in the universe is a Chinese and has a Chinese name)? Really nigga? I mean where are dem Browns, dem Blacks? Also how come all hot chicks are described as white, fair-skinned, like jade? Where them ebony chicks?
Well in this novel, there are Whites, Yellows (japanese-like) and Blacks. That's right, you read correctly, Blacks! And the Blacks got the strongest empire and the other empires are pitiful in comparison. How come you ask? Well, literally cuz of Black power. Seriously, Blacks have a special power.
this novel had an alright premise but it is completely ruined by the incompetency of the author by making the story seem like it was written by a 5 year old
I'm not a huge fan of harem books but this one is really nice. I like the first chapter and couldn't stop laughing at how dumb the mc is.
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As of chapter 310. Writing quality is great. I think the dialogue is smooth flowing and realistic to the setting and period.Desctiptions are also niche, there's never too may unnecessary adjectives. I really love the story and there's lots of mysteries to be uncovered. The characters are easy to imagine and very diverse in appearance and personality. The powers are cool. I really like the main character. I think he's a really interesting one. I don't really know how to articulate my thoughts on him but yeah I like him and I am also fond of the supporting cast. All in all I think this is probably top 3 on the platform.
Not bad, I'm still seeing where this will go, and also update faster
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MC is f$$k too OP
He levels up like 30 times a day while other players in the game level up like 5 - 10 times per day.
MC luck is crazy beyond belief
There's literally no point in reading this novel since there's barely any challenge or obstacle for the character it basically reading his life story (Which is boring as f#k)
The game this novel is about is made by his mom's company and sponsored by his dad's company -_-
This novel touched my liking for this genre, I'm waiting for more chapters it would be the best Christmas gift.
I can't do a review of a novel with less than 100 chapters because I don't know nothing about the world, or time to caring for the characters.
This novel made my day, I hope it gets picked, and the plot becomes more and more better.
It is pure comedy and a good stress reliever, at least till chap 20.
Now let's hope it gets picked.
This book, all in all seems stupidly similar to another novel by the name "Monster Pet Evolution". The initial start is the same, mc can't tame monster then poof can tame monsters, mc tries to learn how to cultivate monsters then does that and gets the money necessary to cultivate his own. This book on the other hand tries to make it easier to keep writing by simplifying the process required to 'evolve' a beast, therefore reducing events required to gain materials, while also trying make him seem more powerful, somehow?
Reason for 'rating':
The flow of the text is sometimes incomprehensible, or just doesn't work.
Story is just a clear cut copy.
Character design is shoddy at best, but then also somewhat of a copy.
Don't care about updating since I won't read past the first 20 chaps.
World background has a bit more content that is it's own, but most of it is still a copy.
If this book isn't a copy or hasn't taken inspiration from MPE, then the author is just inept at researching, writing, and/or creativity.
Contrarily, I highly would recommend anyone that sees this review to check out Monster Pet Evolution. It's finished and has a decently written story all around. The ending will throw you for a loop for a bit but it isn't the worst.
TL;DR This books seems like a rip of another decent monster taming novel of the name Monster Pet Evolution, but it doesn't have nearly the same quality, imo.