wonderful storyI like Blake and the theme of the storyI also love the actionwould love to see where it goesbravo to the author..........
Where to begin , this was my first timing reading this genre but this was an absolute page turner for me. I can see that the author has worked really hard to create a wonderful story. The background and the characters are flawlessly introduced in the story , looking forward to more chapters
Story in a nutshell...
Side character to Chen Beixuan: Hey, I challenge you. What? Cat got your tongue already..? Heh?! What a wuss!
Chen: Courting Death!!
The story is fast paced and has the potential to shine as the author further dwells into the happenings.
Though there are a few grammatical errors, it doesn't take away from the overall sentence structures and is a good read.
There area few horror scenes that are not my cup of tea but then am a faint-hearted person.
Expect more quality work from the author.
This is going to be an honest review from someone who has read a fair amount of books and novels. To begin with you have a very cliche MC. Typical video game plot and leveling system which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The MC uses about 0% of his brain constantly which leads to lots of plot holes and making the readers angry with his stupid and illogical decisions. The book starts off with ok grammar if you can overlook the misuse of present and past tense as well as constant spelling errors but as it continues the grammar only gets worse. It gets so bad that almost every other sentence looks like a five year old wrote it and it honestly gives me a headache. The plot isn't that bad, its the grammar that needs to be fixed. Please hire someone to fix it.
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If you have time, you must read this novel. This novel start with unique mc's background that might annoy you, but it's necessary to its plot development.
Man, don't let author meet me. I'll force him to release the next chapter.
I want to delete this novel from my library but it still there though Ibhave done many ways to remove it. can anyone advise me how to?.Nothing agains it, just not my cup of tea
Our MC transmigrated and becomes a toy maker/tv show producer. As usual our Mc has knowledge that the world doesn't have, but works hard to do so. The plot is decent paced, and is realistic. If you want fast developed pacing this is not it, but if you want world building than this is for you.
The story is just starting, so it’s hard to predict how the plot will go and how detailed it could be. But I’d say that the punctuation and grammar does make me confused sometimes. If you need any help, I’ll try to point out some things. Although, don’t get discouraged ! We all start from somewhere, and I think you have a very good world build, which was my weakest point when I first starting writing. So keep up the good work author !
This is a review based up to chapter 60 of the novel.The chapters were short, but I enjoyed it, enough to spend all my fast passes! I thought the setting was unique, while still maintaining some cliches. The misunderstandings were enjoyable imo and I like seeing their actions when they switch bodies. It's pretty interesting, more than you would think, honestly. I say this as someone who does not usually enjoy the classic cultivation type novels too much, of course there are exceptions, and in my opinion, this one has the potential to be one of those exceptions. I could see it becoming repetitive in the future, but for now I think it has good potential.It's the first I've read out of the new batch, but I rate it highly. I will be reading the next couple that interest me soon. Hopefully they are just as good or even better!