Akgonzalla
Love this story keep up the good work and please keep the chapters coming, really loving the harem you have got going is pretty much perfect.???
Author thank you for such a lovely book, as the story just started there is so much potential to explore.I love how author made MC reach out for the VR game. So lets hope MC builds an Epic business empire using his character.Keep writing, best of luck
Helps companions and family? LoL he can't even help himself and still saying he will help others?? ?????
Nice
Well first this novel has a very stable update and is filled with long chapters so if you are looking for a story that won't be dropped then you came to the right place also if you are looking for a mc that actually uses his brain then this is the story also if you are looking for relationships that actually develop and mean something then this is the place to go and finally op mc
Hilarious but also worried he's going to be a simp MC lol
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
So, for starters... Interesting. The novel is actually incredibly well done. Although there are the usual misgendering and misspelling at times, the overall premise and story telling is actually quite good. (The 1 star comments are bots who trash every novel on the website- ignore them) So far (ch.20) the progression is quite well done. The only issue I have with it is the whole synopsis, (choice A or B or C, all of them) which hasn't really played out at all and considering the character's personality it's unlikely to happen. The world building is fairly well done though there isn't much of it. Then again this is SO FAR, I have no idea what's to come but my interest has been piqued with this one. (The people complaining about the character being dense and unaware of how strong he actually is, are idiots.. he had no actual skills to test his strength nor does he know anything about the world level, as far as he's concert his journey just began.) it's only a 4.0 for now as it's still in trial and the way it goes from here will determine what I actually rate it. (Don't worry I never give 5.0 ratings)
A well executed, generic disciple novel. This is unoriginal but I tend to like these types of novels. As long as you don't take it too seriously you'll find that it's a fairly inoffensive and laid back read. Many generic tropes but the clean execution makes it difficult to have strong feelings (positive and negative ones) towards this novel. This might have potential similar to the other fairly popular Master-Disciple novels out now so I'm giving this a generous score. 3/5
nice to see you novo that is not fanfic really appreciate the effort and look forward to more chapters to the other hope you do well and continue writing i've added you to my reading list fighting !
This is a thot collector novel. MC: arrogant because he has repeated 10 thousand years of the same day, gaining skills and knowledges.Because of his arrogance he wants to collect the “hottest” girls knowing that he’ll offend a lot of people while doing so. he also acts mysterious while displaying his skills that he gain in those 10 thousand years.
Writing quality-5Updating stability-5Story development-3.5Character design-2World Background-5Honestly the plot and world development are really good, but i just dont really like how the mc is a saint. im fine with nice MCs but this is just a little overboard.
