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Good quality story and best writing... Mind attractive script . Character design also good.... Actually I like this.. Congratulation dahali...
This story was definitely interesting, but I feel like there needs to be some work on the pacing.The chapters are a little too short imo and the overall story progression feels very slow. I feel like before we were going into such a long arc we should have spent more time with the original setting.A lot of the initial flare kinda got lost. I wanna go back to who I assume was the mc and continue his story.Also (and this is very personal...) I'm not that into gambling so a lot of the future chapters kinda lost me.THAT SAID!!! I do feel this is very well written and that the characters are well developed and charming to follow. I just wish the direction went somewhere different, or at the very least went somehwere faster.
The synopsis piques my attention the reason why I continue to read the story. The author did very well in describing the scenes and the plot is been lay down perfectly. Hoping for an update. Overall the story is nice! And gonna recommend this to a friend:) Keep it up????????
Well done, I've read this twice now and enjoy it each time. I'm hoping that you were going to write more in the future. I'm waiting patiently!
Spectacular. Without a doubt. Sdrawkcab is an excellent author who has only improved with this newest edition to the Evolution series. What's impressed me so far is that she wasn't afraid to change up the character dynamics and relationships to further develop their characters. And yet it feels completely reasonable. Keep up the good work! :)-Ninefingers
Very underrated, just get through 10-20 chapters and you will be hooked. The best points are the characters, their interactions, and comedy, which stand out among the vast majority of webnovels here. Translation quality and frequency are great considering the lesser popularity and lack of ads or premium (don't fight me but I'd support either for a lesser known good novel with good translation like this). Story development is kind of slow, but not unbearably, and the background of the world is good but not the best, and is kept vague on purpose so far. Note: You may get a harem vibe initially with the many women around the MC but it's really not like that at all (the women don't show any romantic interest as of 241, also according to others it's not a harem and only one love interest appears at 1400 or so). In fact despite the fact many stores try to pull off the "a lot of girls around the MC but pretending it's not a harem
I love this story. I literally read what chapters were available within two days.I’ve read a bit of this authors other books that get updated more frequently and they are good too but they don’t hold my interest like this one. So author I hope you update this story a bit more frequently then you have been. I don’t need daily updates but maybe once or twice a week would be lovely.Now, writing quality is very good. Few errors here and there but nothing that detracts from the reading experience.Writing stability, as I have only read this a few weeks ago but there has only been one update since. Refer to my initial paragraph of I’s love a slightly more frequent update schedule.Story and world development is really good. The world is what I would hope of the genre this novel is. Flawed. The society is literally a toilet and our MC learns it the hard way. His main desire is to just go back to his grandfather and live in ambiguity. Which I relate to on many levels.Character design isn’t anything special at the beginning of the story. Our MC is relatively plain in the beginning but the changes he goes through from story development make him interesting. All other characters are what I consider the basic anime palette.Now as this is a system novel I feel it deserves a mention. It literally involves trading, a skill I think is valuable especially for someone who doesn’t usually handle money or hang around “civilized” society. It’s the perfect system for the MC what happens to him.This a worth while story! I highly recommend it.
Congratulations on the exceptional book. The author has already talked about this in the synopsis, but I will point out, the MC has the mentality of a monster unlike other soap operas where a cognitively impaired beta was hit by a truck or died saving someone, is reborn as a monster, and is more human than much of humanity wanting to be the savior of the world. I understand that the author will develop the mc's personality throughout the story, but I really hope you don't humanize the MC, if the story continues with an MC who always acts for benefits, I will always support
Very good novel like most other orc novels like “I am a orc” or something it does the orcs justiceI Love orcs