RiseShiner
The story has a good amount writing and progresses at a manageable pace and for once the main character is not a wimp that gets fooled by every pretty face he sees.
very very good .....................................................................................................................................
So extremely disappointing that this did not get picked there was no real bad novel that got picked this time unlock other novels just ones I didn't like
It's got good main characters, but I think it suffers too much from the intentional "evil world" design.What I mean is that everyone everywhere are just greedy monsters who strive for power and kill millions of others for shits and giggles.Also most if not all characters somewhat relevant to the story all build their power in some way by using randoms as food for their cultivation.This creates a problem in my opinion since the "MC faction" can't really have greedy power hungry mindless villains as friends, but instead needs to find "unique" people or simply mind-control subordinates.This in turn creates a problem where everyone is mindless and the story predictable except for when the main crew does something smart.Another problem I have is the use of ridiculously excessive numbers such as billions, trillions etc. They are numbers too big for a human mind to even understand the implications of. It's common to use in Xianxia for some reason, but I find it annoying to read as the implication of "billion" becomes a "trivial" thing to the story, making it seem not special whatsoever. Using 10 thousand instead would be a number one could picture in their head and still seem very impressive."Slaughtering a trillion people in an instant" > ...Uhh okay?"Slaughtering a city of 10 thousand people in just a few hours" > You pretty much see the bloodbath taking place.The story isn't bad though, and DPs writing quality is good, as it was in his other works.
The story is very novel but there’s just way too much filler. It’s great at the beginning. But soon it becomes like 60% trash talk. After each exam, there’s 5-10 chapters of nothing but people commenting on how the hero will fail when we KNOW from his background that he got first. It’s the same for every fight and competition. It’s so boring once the exam starts.
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Holy **** this is bad. it's like reading a story written by a 12 year old who can only use the same plot device over and over. But as you are on this site you don't give a crap about that and will love it! try it out today, you piece of **** with low reading comprehension!
I'ma be honest this isn't some new idea or something you never seen before it's a pretty standard story but it's a well done one
Read in raws further.- If you like dramatic irony you'll like this for the first 55-60 chapters. - Somewhat reminiscent of the scholars advanced technological system - lots of science_ If you are Japanese you will not like the translated version (at first)- The translation of course changes the main character to American and dumbs down the various math proof concepts to (literally) Science #4, Science #5 etc. Its a fun enough read but they scrubbed past the 64 chapter from the internet so good luck reading past there.raws name: 全人类假失踪,造宇宙飞船的我被直播了
Hello ...I'm interested in this novel.But, before I read this, could you tell me if this novel have s*x scenes?Because I tend to avoid novel with *** scenes no matter what the genre is.Thank you.
