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This was confusing Silk. Immortality cannot be possible and the demons can't be close to artificially making it a reality. This could spill the end for anyone but demon kind, they would achieve ultimate domination.
It also show that much highly the power the more sp it requires.
It's one of the better novel available in Web Novel.Give it a try, I am sure you will like it.
nah I can't stop rating this book... this booke needs to get more viewers
I like what's going on with the setting presented in this story. The world is being shown to us via scenes and proper narration as instead of a giant info dump or in some cases, every aspect of the world being presented in the auxilary volume (like a guide). This novel is a good example of how a world should be shown. It's okay if some parts of the world are being told to us, the reader, but it's best to let the rest of the setting be shown to the reader for painting the picture in their minds. There's only two aspects of this novel I have an issue with: some paragraphs are quite big and massive, so it's best to cut them down especially for mobile readers. There's also the updating. I understand if the author has a lot going on other than writing this story, but if I may recommend, it's best to stockpile on google docs; write and edit the chapters, that way if you want to say, upload a chapter a day, it'll be easier. Stories and their respective chapters take time, and you author, have the basis of a good story. I just hope your schedule is managed especially for the readers who have given your novel positive reviews. Good luck.
I love mc idk what to write here so i am typeing random stuff but the anthor here is active I wrote a comment a few minutes ago and she already likes it
11/10 would read againThis is a book with thingsIt is mostly about humansIt is also mostly complaints about humansyeeeeeeeeeeeeeetHinest opinion: I like it very much
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The pacing is good, your characters are great especially Alexander, I love their design and development, the background is good and so are your descriptions and plot. Love the twists, overall a good story. Keep up the good work
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Made it to chapter 94 before i decided to drop the book, mind you the book isn't bad. It checks a lot of boxes. Sadly by chapter 94 it followed the same old tired path of every wuxia novel. Bunch of retarded power hungry spoiled morons who throw their weight around, soon as i hit that section i was like welp time to look for a new book. Now prior to that everything was going great, author made a really good world backdrop and the mc was realistic and refreshing. The thrones concept was also super nice as that adds plenty of room in the story development. Oh how i wish the author avoided the same old super used and generic princesses, prince by the buckets who all act like spoiled morons path. Now if your ok with that then do pick up this book as it is an awesome and fun read. Good luck author keep up the good work i hope to read one of your future books that doesn't follow the same old tired wuxia moronic moves. Cause seriously if you put even 20 morons with immense power and lack of control and totally spoiled in a medieval period city complete with their own guards and backers that city will die and implode in less than a year. You will destroy the economy and security driving everyone out fast not to mention all the ones they will kill just because they are spoiled rotten morons. Now multiply that by say 1000 since you made a sex addicted emperor with a crap ton of kids. Now you see the picture i hope. That city shouldn't exist with those morons running around.