Now that 50 Chaps are up, I am updating my previous review.This is my first novel after reading webnovels for than 2 years, so except some grammatical mistakes. I would be happy to correct any mistakes if you readers point it out.The main reason MC is playing the VR game is for money. So, he doesn't have grand ambitions like be the top player, etc.The MC gradually becomes an OP character due to factors like future knowledge, some unexpected gains, etc.Everything he does, he plans it and takes no. of measures in case of failures taking full advantage of his perfect memory due to reason unknown.There are 3 main FL's that are really important characters. Yes, they will be in MC's harem.But, the harem matter won't happen for 200 some chapters and it won't be some stupid forced harem like collecting Pokémon. So, do give it a try even if you don't like harem.Some mysteries are there.And lastly, you can ask any question you would like to in here. I will answer all of them.Thanks For Reading My Novel.
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The concept is fantastic! Although I have only read few chapters of your book, I was drawn inside that world! The only few points that I'd like to point out is the usage of tenses (since you started with past tense, I think you should use past participle words.) and filter words. Besides that, I think this novel is going to be fantastic!
I absolutely love this novel! I am surprised that it hasn’t been given the recognition it truly deserves! It’ s so good that I have stayed up until 4 in the morning to finish as many chapters as I could! I sincerely hope the author will continue the story! In the meantime I will continue to donate power stones!❤️❤️❤️????????
I liked it more than the usual since the revenge actually happened and the misunderstandings were actually eventually resolved, but it was quite lackluster. In addition, he can't seem to lose feelings for his ex-wife (who cheated on him and is obviously a gold digger), and according to what I've read in some other reviews, they even get back together. I very, very rarely write reviews, but this novel is terrible.
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Je met une note élever malgré le fais que je ne soi pas fan de l'incorporation de l'univers d'autre jeu ou serie. en effet l'univers HxH se suffit a lui même.I give it a high rating despite the fact that I'm not a fan of incorporating the universe of another game or series. indeed the HxH universe is self-sufficient
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Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, SciFi, ComedyThis novel is forever free?One chapter per day releaseJust a shameless review for a shameless book from a shameless author?
Decent start up to chapter 30 with fairly logical and good progression, but then turns into the typical cringeworthy crowd reaction novel that all the Chinese webnovel artists write to boost their word count.Here’s how the story will go from chapter 30 onward: someone says the MC can’t do it, MC does it, crowd reacts for a chapter, rinse and repeatEven though there are billions of players, the MC only ever ‘randomly’ comes across god-level players somehow.This is not even half as good as ROTSSG, regardless of whether you think ROTSSG is good or not.
this person he or she is A TRUE PERSON. THANK GOD U DID THIS, IT WAS THE ONLY GOOD BOOK I HAVE SEEN IN A LONG TIME ON TRIAL READ. ONCE AGAIN THANK THANK THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!++++!!
Just gonna casually give meself a five star review here. Nice. Shameless action of day. DoneAny whoop, I'm enjoying the writing process. Hope you guys enjoy the read.You see that [Add to Library] button up there? Wanna press it? If you like the story, please press it. Is that enough words? I can post the review now? Yes? Tsk... Noice.