I have read many interesting novels, but this is the first time writing one, I have no experience in writing so please try continue to read,the reason I am writing the novel I liked TNE, The Academy’s Deceased Ate It All, lastly Author POV I liked academy life of main character in all this novel, while reading these novel many thoughts popped up, I am just trying to put my thoughts into a book,in feature my thoughts can run wildly please endure. If there is any corrections please mention on comments. thankyou my updates will be regular from next week
Yay! New book from the author of The First Order and Spare Me, Great Lord! Hope this gets picked. First Order was extremely awesome and I heard that this is the sequel of it. Not sure, might be wrong, but the novel should be good all the same.
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I had so much expectations,but I'm dying here author, sooo good novel but u have to make mc an eunuch, so please use your right hand more and stop writing what u will never feel.
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Awesome novel ! Great action ! Maybe writing this review for the xp. Maybe not lol. Or maybe yes. Or maybe not. Or maybe yes. Or maybe not. Or maybe yes. 140 characters achieved haha ! But legit , it is worth the read from what I've seen.
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The author's decision to have it be based on D&D is sas for the novel. Everything is pretty good except the save throws in a world that is supposed to bé close to reality.
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This story is actively irritating. The writing is decent, but the author seems to have forgotten that secondary characters can and should have emotions other than adoration towards the mc. While I tend to find harems annoying in general I wouldn't rate a book down for it's choice in genre. But... harems can be a compelling way to tell a lot e story complicated by the number of competitors and complications in a relationship. this doesn't do that. characters are flat and seem to be introduced in their final state with just about zero development. I've only made it to ch 18 so maybe it gets better, however I'm dropping it here as I feel the flaws here are with the foundation, and not the overall story itself. it just feels like the author is feeling up his MC and it makes me uncomfortable.
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