is this the same one where he get the system where money is used ?
Where can I find more novels by this author?
Pretty good tbh
I actually bore through 300 chps before finally exhausting my patience capacities in full. Wtf is this?? There's too much plot armor!! There's no intricate or detailed plotting against the FL yet as soon as she appears, Voila, it's solved and she gets the last hurrah?? Am just disappointed as hell. The ML is nothing but a backdrop to FL's haughtiness. Legit betraying logics.
lotm , cultivation online ,ri, lightning is the only way , infinite mana in apo... these are some gud ones i have gone through you can check it out
All that bluster and boasting, just to die in an instant.
please continue
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
I can see why the first chapter could make people uncertain about continuing the novel.
First chapter is a little awkward in the way it's done, but after that, it's pretty good, enough that you forget that first chapter.
I feel like the pace is good and that it's interesting enough to keep reading.
If I had one thing to improve, it would probably be the dialogue, but since I'm reviewing this early on, it's probably already fixed. Chapter one and chapter two is day and night, so chapter 70+ should be even better.
If Menes losses again, Alexander should replace this black general.. All he does it lose big battles. Why bring cavalry when you just want to play hide and seek in the Hills? This Menes is so inept as a commander / general.
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good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers