wow, this book is amazing. You need to read it ASAP. Of course, you'd wonder how the author would manage with the supporting character premise...I did too. But the author's done exceptionally well, though he becomes the mc to us, he still acts with the supporting character idealogy, one which the author has used so well. I'll recommend this book to y'all. It's great.
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I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again
Shameless Review of the Author, Hello guys, I have been motivated after reading some big novels like Perfect Superstar and I am really a SuperStar and also some other novels. So, I decided to make this novel. I am a novice writer, So yeah you will see some mistakes and plotholes, but I'll try my best to not make the mistakes.Rest All please Read this novel, It will be slow novel and romance will also be late mainly after some plot building. I hope you will like it, Thanks!
what a story the characters are so good in this story and the writer did a fantastic job and every character is so good in this story to keep it up I would love to be your reader
Story starts off great, but...I came and saw the tags, such as #harem.I can say from the start when I started reading till chapter 17 that it should focus more on the MC because some readers just want to know on how the harem would usually start until it really becomes a 'harem'. This strange thought came to my mind that the male side characters were the harem of the MC, because the early chapters already started simultaneously detailing and focusing on the MC and the Side characters.Introduction of side characters came out quicker than what I thought, you could've just started slow with one. Other side characters at the start doesn't really give that much support in the start story of the MC.The story hooked me but stopped me from reading when the 2 male side characters started showing up, what is this? is this drama where a love triangle starts then goes to pentagon then octagon, so on...I just skimmed and scanned and was too lazy to actually read because wherever I stop and try to actually read, it starts in a place where the side character shows up.This gives vibes of Western and Eastern novel mixed together, that it makes me irritated when I think the about the negative points of both types of novel in one novel.I would like to continue reading, but giving this review, it's time for me to move on and go to other novels.- Still rooting for improvement ? -
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La historia va bien es excelente y original, además va desarrollando trama poco con muy pocos huecos.y por último es constante la salida. Lo único que le faltan son capitulos y ya, todo esta bien para mi.
A perfect story to change from the "standar" and rule for write a story, very funny de story and at this num of chapters is enjoyable to read
Amazing development of the storyline!!..?✨ The blend of different characters add up to the deepening plot!!!??Can’t wait for the next chapters!!!???
.............................finally a good read
I have read astral pet store in start it was more about pets and less about human cultivation. your pet are the main fighting force and you are the support but later mc got way powerful for his pets that they kind of became useless for the story.