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An ok novel it could be better if it was not using the Same cliche everybody uses in this type off novels............,.,.,l..ĺĺ.,,,,- class xv xv xv xv xv xv xv xv xv xv
Fat my head hurts from reading Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot Mc is idiot
BrB ...System ... Er... get... -3 Chapt... per Day !!!!!...Reader: NNNNOOOO!!!!I really found a gem this time!..............................................................................................
Bring some tissue if you'll read this novel, you'll probably need it."Love is in the air, you cant touch but you can feel it, and you know it exist."well, bla bla bla.Please support this novel.:)
Ironically that I am giving my own book a review but I have something important for all to know...I am currently 12 years old. It's 2018. I am in school so I usually only release 2 chapters in each holiday but sometimes I write in math class... As a 12 year old I this is my first time writing a proper book. Each chapter I write should have slightly more words than the last. I accept all comments but no spam. Thank you for reading my book.
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Its pqcked with passion and nostalgia, whule some descriptions are unnecessary I still think this book is really captivating since it doesnt only focus on LoL but also the private life of the MC.
This is a story of cunning and smart Mc so I like it. The story development is honestly awesome but the other side character needs more polishing. Aside from that I enjoyed the small drama very much.
this is the first time i ever write a review in my entire life. in my opinion, you are so good t describing the story, the plot, the character,etc.well done and great job.can't wait to read all of the chapters.
too much-talking nonsense. 10 chapters just for one goal to finish. ,..........................my opinions.too much-talking nonsense. 10 chapters just for one goal to finish. ,..........................my opinions.
now that I've read up to date, I feel I can honestly give my impression of the novel. Sloth's character development for the mc Bart is honestly quite astounding. watching how a fat kid who was bullied on earth and reincarnated interacts and grows within the world of cultivation is quite unique. the basic story at the beginning isn't all that unique with just the crazy vast number of cultivation novels and storylines out there; but sloth's approach and how he develops the characters truly is. The way in which we watch the character Bart interact with the world prior to Eve's coma and then after sparks the beginning of true growth in bart. prior to her coma, the way in which he interacts with the people and this world's culture shows a distinct lack of awareness of "the rules of the world" or it's culture; resulting in him being highly naive and immature. Bart attempts to apply the ethics and morals of modern america on earth with a cultivation world, whose values and politics couldn't be any more different. The journey he goes through once she ends up in a coma with him wrestling with the morals instilled in him by his parents on earth, with the reality that using those morals in this new world, only restricts him and no one else, allowing people to take advantage of him. Bart deals with his pain at the apparent loss of his beloved and his unborn child, by killing with impetuity and ***ing anything that moves in a desperate attempt to gain enough resources and strength to attempt to save his woman from a situation caused by his own hubris and naivety. when he saves her and their souls grow even closer, he matures and is able to reconcile the morality he grew up with, with the morality of his current home, discarding most of his naivety and maturing by a large amount. the story hasn't completely finished yet, though it appears to be quite close to completion, but If you're looking for a story that exhibits personal growth, loss, and sweet sweet heart melting love I would definitely reccomend this novel to anyone who doesn't mind or would enjoy the smut that happens throughout the story. it's worth a read, and Demotivatedslot, thanks for the hard work I look forward to seeing the ending