My main issue here is the protagonist: namely, throughout the entire nineteen chapters, he's a baby, so he doesn't really do anything. He's literally just caried around by angels and/or the system 24/7 without any of his own input going into this. You could replace the MC with an actual baby and the plot would be unchanged.
marvel vibes honestly but yeah good one lol .
REVIEW TIME!! The story so far is great. This is so fascinating and fun to read novel. I hope the Author will do everything he can do make the story more greater.
I recommend this Novel to all Readers.
Keep up the goodwork
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the name is like half of ebays items like bruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh
Jesus, sorry I have to write this, the mc is the most shameless, despicable and pervert mc that I ever read throughout dozen novel that I have in my library?Sorry writer, can you make the mc more decent. Thank You
The Story and progression is very good. Including some more details will be good (but this is my opinion).I hope author continues to write this story :D , as I saw many authors in similar genre have abandoned :'(
Helloooo everyone! I bring good news! Author has updated her Weibo (chinese twitter). It is a bit cryptic tho, but it basically means she's back! my prayers have been answered!Word is that she will start releasing new chapters on February (this I am not sure).her statement is something along the lines of: Body of scars but time has returned.(a little more context: she had said before she didn't have time, and she was hesitating and stuff.)anyways, please cheer up ^^ let's not rate the book badly, authors do have their life outside of writing. let's cheer them on and encourage them instead ?❤
It started off really good, up until all of a sudden he has multiple personalities which just completely ruins the story. Not to mention how cringy it got once it started.
I love thos story. It's slow-paced and occasionally it seems like nothing is happening, but it's still an enjoyable read. I wish the translation had better editing though.
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I've read only 4-5 chapters yet So don't know where the story is goingI liked it but dear author what's with the pointless and needless use of Japanese words/verbs the totally make the story feel out of place With a mediaeval western world building use of Japanese words makes me feel awkward while reading especially the use of word seishin or whatever which is important part of the world's power system As a non-japanese reader who completely doesn't understand the words' meaning it makes me turn my back on the storyI really hope you can change the use of Japanese words with more familiar English words or atleast translate those words into English