author you are The best and you did a very great job.i really love this novel
Brother you are a good writer.
I want to give you five star but I am deducting this only because you started premium from 28th chapter,at least you can start from 50. Do inform me when you are limited free for a day.
Thank you .
I like how you outlined your character in a design that would be relatable to your readers. Personally, I love a main character that could make me feel something and that's what made me feel about him. Moreover, as I read through the novel, it was very easy to read, resembling a feel-good novel, the type that would give the readers a sense of relief and belonging, I guess?
I've read until chapter 2. Until now, I'm very intrigued at how he will carry out his life in this new world, not to mention, as a janitor. However, some sentences seem off-putting in terms of tenses. I suggest you be consistent with this one as this may distract your readers' attention in the novel. Regardless, to me, they aren't worth mentioning compared to the novel's premise itself. But still, work on them if you want to improve your writing skills further.
Overall, it's very interesting. I have already added this to my library and will read this in my free time! Good job, author! :)))
Great! This is just Great. Ideally liked the story from where the Mc shows up. I like how Mc's weapon is really unique.
In many novels they have sword, dagger, spears, but this guy has two cubes, just cubes and is literally overpowered.
Really loving the book so far! Only early days so we don't have a whole lot of general world building, but we do have a lot of localized world building and I love that we're learning along with the MC about what's happening. I'm glad you haven't jumped straight to the MC getting betrayed by everything because that is a really overused plot device and while it works....it's not the best to see it in every other book lol
*Spoiler*
I am worrying though about how they're going to handle getting every skill to level 5 if they keep getting more new skills and personally I would've immediately attempted to clear the 5 dungeons since they're getting a new skill every-time but is what it is. The could potentially just save the skills papers for after the 4 months? Idk how reliable that would be though. They really do need to focus on farming these skills though, I would be using them every second I could! lol
The storyline is unique and good, but the imprecise and lengthy writing sometimes leaves readers confused. The character portrayal is not in-depth enough, but chapter 1 is interesting to read and needs improvement in the writing. Keep up the good work author!
I guess a Review is due, shameless author here. Story will follow our Dragon mc in his new life, this will mainly be for fans of the monster mc genre, I decided to start one as only god knows we need more of these.
So ya, hope you guys will enjoy! Spirit stones and reviews are very much appreciated as always.
-Simo
reluctantly read15 chapters . i didn't like it.Chinese novels, guy going out for trouble. and every passersby becomes extreme busy buddy . end of the day he finds trouble and kill people left right. no other character than MC
I've already made a review on this before but it's taking webnovel to long to pick this up and make new chapters since this is a Hella good novel with amazing story (in my opinion atleast)
I've read until the latest chapter and this is actually pretty good!Spoilers Ahead....The plot twist on the first test of the Lucid Dream Server was actually what I wasn't expecting and also, this book is not what I was expecting when it comes to a virtual reality novel. Also, I didn't expect that the main character is literally blind. But although he was blind, the story was not boring.You've outdone yourself, author-san! Thank you so much for your third book and congratulations on getting the contract!
Story is good and all, but I really start to hate the Mc…. Currently chapter 10 or so, but if I were the system I would have already killed the Mc and searched for another host.
5/5 must read book.
No other isekai is as good as this, tropes which are unexpected, and what I expects to happens, ends up being a twist. Good read, cannot wait for new chapters to be published.