The story and characters are interesting, as well as the world. However I did get lost at times trying to read this webnovel. And in regards to the stability of updates, it's best if you wrote all of Volume 1, and then you publish the whole thing. That's my advice.But this is worth reading.
Great book so far but I don’ know how everyone affords to read these books, it’ like 10 bucks to read 50 chapters
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Okay... I can proudly say this is the first novel on webnovel that I've read with such zeal. I just kept reading chapter after chapter and soon, I found myself immersed in it.It's amazing and even though it's pacing is a little slow, the level of description is amazing. Author should probably do a bit more description on the major characters. It'll help us have an imaginative picture of them while there's no release reference yet.
Honestly poor grammar/english and over use of the world "mam" really dont understand why. World building so far and character introductions are poor
Overall it's just another junkfood trash harem CN novel with the System. IMO the System feels out of place and shouldn't have been added in this novel but hey, it's only an opinion.Anyways I have to drop this because I'm quite tired of characters mocking the MC when the MC did nothing at all. Like why? What's the point? He didn't even start cultivating yet and they kept trashing him, are they all bunch of braindead? Do they have brainrot? We're they not raised by their mothers? Do they not have father figures? I'm sick reading this kind of characters.One look at this novel and I can tell that it's gonna be full of Faceslapping and arrogant Young Masters all over the place. And of course there's definitely gonna be a bunch of r*pist that will covet MC's Jade Beauty which of course the MC will save at the very last possible millisecond.This is what I feel after reading within 20 chapters. And I know there are people that will tell me to read more and give it more chance but this is the first impression I get reading this and for me it's important since it will decide whether I will invest time reading this or not. I basically read this kind of novel dozens and dozens of times already and I'm not quite keen to add another one. That's all, bye.
Very good writing and the story is very enjoyable. GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS! I really appreciate the authors attention to detail and his ability to arite complete sentences with decent grammar. I would recommend giving this book a shot and maybe a power stone or 10!
WHAT I've read up to chapter 46. this is basically Jojo part 1???. A legendary mercenary guy is using a harmonized breathing technique to fight human/monsters created by the Mc. The Mc is a broken soul wanting to become not a god but a manipulator of all things(basically an edgy Dio) but I rate it 10/10.
Mark my word if you don't read this novel, you will regret it! Well... or not since you won't know how good this novel is...........................................................
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