Good story , Nice starting and also detailed but not too much information which is quite good. Well I want to say that it's enjoying but don't use too much cliche like love interests are kidnapped and threatened for being r*ped which is only thing I don't like. It decrease interest in story and let readers worry about girls which too cliche and unacceptable for me. Well nice , keep it up
Hmmm… how should i say it…After chapter 20 or so the writing quality would decrease drastically [Example: He became 2 times stronger because of the Golden Power Suddenly a Golden energy flourished inside his Merdians.]It’s like the beginning of the Chapter is the End of the ChapterAnd the End of the chapter is the BeginningAuthor pulled a Uni Reverse on this
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I picked this book up hoping it was going to be a brilliant read. trying to read it was a problem for my eyes. Trying to listen to the story was a problem for my ears. The premise of the story could be amazing, it failed in its execution by having such limitations as bad grammar, confusing sentences that merge several ideas. Hope you get an editor because I look forward to reading the story
I like it so far I hope you can continue to post more chapters in the future....................................................................
Really good story, surprised how I read it so quickly. The whole story is pretty smooth in terms of pacing and dialogue. I'm not sure I like the sound of this council that showed up in chapter 200 ish. I came for OPness but it sounds like there are plenty more similar people. Hopefully he gets a power up in his soul usage then.
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Written to a professional standard with excellent grammar and punctuation. A true masterpiece, with ingenious storyline and layout.10/10 would recommend a read. The author is a true artist of their work.
Very impressed with this book's start so far, loved how fitting you included the perspective writing that it flows well and rolls off the tongue.Maybe, I should ask you to become my teacher of proofreading, haha!Anyway, I can't wait to see more of the story as it goes on! Keep it up, ya legend!Loved the MC's friend, such a fun character with his exploitative tricks.
It true later on it is a little different,but point is you just took different idea from different novels and made it a little better. I prefer some more original ideas. No matter how you wrap something more beautifully,it is still the same item. Plus this character design is nothing new. Plenty of them out there that are similar like him. For me it is just too edgy and cliche.
I am loving this story I thank you so much for spending your spare time to translate this for us readers. Please continue to translate at what ever speed you can just so long as you do not abandon it like so many others have.
Well The Writing Quality Is Good, There Is Room For Story Development.Author can Try To liven Up Characters By Emphasizing More On Emotional Aspect as well as their featured.The Most Promising Thing, Is World Background. Which Author Can Further Improvised To Inter-Galatic Wars or more As Author may see fit, As There will be different species in future author can I have our MC s*x With Inter-species.Well Author May Need To First As Public Opinion As There May Not Be Many People Who are Interested In Such Kinky Stuff...Well Last But Not Least It Has Room For Growth But The Book Has Not Been Updated For Probably 5 Months So I Gave 1 Star If Possible I won't give a starI ain't Stingy, But Yeah If You Dropped This Please Mentioned It So Others May Not Get Their Hopes Irked Upon This Story .I Will Change This Review After Author Has Upoladed Enough Chapters For Further Assessment Thank You ❤️