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Its okay. The characters are very not not funny not funny funny. Its a funny novel. But it needs more chapters. Even though the novel might be new I suggest that you make 10 chapters before you actually release your novel. Think about it, you can go back and chech your spelling after you release your chapters.
Still no idea what this story is. Is it a star wars system story or a story about a system designed for star wars as fighting in space not the movie stuff....
Looks okay
Sounds really good. Can we get the released out already please!!!! Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!!Faster release!!!!Faster release!!!!
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I have to say, as a massive fan of the Zelda video games I absolutely loved this! Gave me serious Breath of the Wild vibes. Loved the idea of goblins and creatures suddenly appearing from all over the world, and temples which have to be cleared to level up and progress - straight out of an RPG game. The fight scenes as the protagonist battles his way through small hordes of goblins are all great, as diverse as can be in various sword tactics and very well-written. I liked how the protagonist has developed from a meek child and is transforming himself into the hero of the piece as he discovers he has a natural ability to defeat the goblins and is growing in strength the more enemies he defeats. Really great stuff so far. This story has a really pacy opening and has limitless potential to go very far. Highly recommend giving this a go.
I love it along with all things from Exodus. The author has created a world in which he can move in so many interesting directions. I'm really looking forward to the completion of this work.
More of what made TAP awesome to read. New characters added and a new game. It's still early, only about 40 chapters in, but the MC and his friends are in the mid-levels and really affecting things on the newly opened Phoenix Server. Tal, Quinn, Anna, Leah, Mojo and the Songbirds are frequent visitors. Songbird Robin has a bigger role in this story then she did in the last.
This is a great novel that is crippled by the slow releases/low chapter count. The cover art is also a bit off putting (I at least thought there was going to be some wierd loli/siscon stuff going on that meant I kept putting off starting this). However, the book so far has been amazing. The characters are reasonably well fleshed out and ridiculous at the same time which is always a plus for me. There are a few characters which may eventually get annoying but so far I like all of them. The world is interesting, the system is (at least so far) not so OP that I lose interest, and the plot seems to be slow moving but good. All in all definitely worth reading, just wish there was more to read...
Very Good continue.
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