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Those words widened Echidna's black eyes. She raised her hand and took another sip of her Tea. Then, she placed it back on the table and crossed her arms.
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The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.
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The character are lit# the poor life of alice
Not too shabby. While the beginning stumbles a little as it tries to find its voice, tempo, and emphasis, it eventually settles into its own rhythm.MC could be described as OP while attempting to prove that he is not OP. He always has enough points or luck or items to do everything. At first, Inn is squished to the side as MC does dumb things on earth, but thankfully, before I lost my patience, Inn returns to center stage, with MC's shenanigans diminished. If the author ever considers rewriting the beginning, it is advised that they devote more time to the inn and either reduce or move the MC's shenanigans later. Many low star reviews are about absence of inn in beginning chapters: “Not even half of the first 20 chapter is actually about the Inn.”/Rappel; “This has great potential right until chapter 10. The author completetly ruined their work.”/KIING (10 chapter introduces cultivators on earth and shifts focus from inn to MC shenanigans on earth); “Forced plot with cultivators and his family.”/Elder; Readers dislike for cultivation probably comes from two facts: it takes away time from the inn and every world and dimension has the same type of cultivation. All worlds have similar feeling. It is almost bad as MassEffect color ending. Choose your world, one has humans, other world has humans and dead humans, third has humans and animals, but all of them have cultivation and humans! Even none humans look like humans. Overall, readable novel if you don’t mind OP MC, cultivation, and aliens that are all human.
Really enjoying this story. I like the characters.
This book is undoubtedly the best novel of all ages in the category of cultivation with leveling system. The plot development seems infinite and very flexible at all times. Compared to any novel in the same category this novel is a complete package which garnered a huge pool of readers who had have different preferences. The main character itself possessed the very ideal characteristics among all protagonist in all novels in the same category. To the author and to the divine master translator, "I wish you all the best". Have a nice day.
good novel, a couple of grammar mistakes but nothing that stops the fun of reading this fun novel, has an amazing idea ans good world building and character building, i recommend reading it
read it till end or you will regret it all your life.masterpiece it is!! there may be some dissatisfaction regarding the behavior of people but it is reaally a good novel.
