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Nice novel author-san, thou there are some grammatical mistakes. you are writing pretty good and the story is going pretty well. and, I think romance is a bit early and can create some chemistry between characters.
Have a lot of potential, good writing style but I will wait for more chapters for a honest review ?????????????????????
Hello, this is the author. I give my work 4 stars because I think there is always room for improvement.I hope You like my work and if so please write a review.
One of the best master and disciple book I have read. This is for people who like an op mi c
This is pretty dope guys, please let there be more because I found the raw it's not bad......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Early in the development yet much better then 99,9% of the novels in here. Would recommend to anyone who likes the related tags of ‘game world’, ‘adventure’ and the others. Characters are individuals and not lifeless bag of filling. Writing quality is great and the story is far from the cliches past the first two chapters.
Great pace and character building. It is a cliche story, but written well. It has a typical start: retunrning to past after being dumped,but in this story it represents the previous life of the mc and building his character.So 10/10
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So, while the story is mostly enjoyable, I have been having trouble with the mindset of the MC. he was raised as an assassin. From 3 years old. While I don't know what a child assassin mindset would be like...I would assume he was trained to be patient, listen, be aware, take in information before acting, and would generally be colder and more indifferent to people. Unfortunately, while he has his moments of brilliance in planning and fighting, his overall attitude, intelligence, social perception, and thoughtfulness are equivalent to some of the worst Japanese isekai protagonist s I have ever read. In other words...he's dumber than a baked potato. Then there are the side characters...everyone has this laissez faire, forgetful attitude that makes it near impossible to treat all but a few of the characters with any sort of seriousness...no matter their importance or power level. That, and the translation quality make me rate this book lower than it could be.
It was actually quite enjoyable until chapter 171. From then on the translation quality droped from standard English to garbage machine translator. I will not give more than 1 Star until the translation is fixed
The novel is not westernizied. That itself makes it it a lot better and intersting to read. The translation quality is good. So is the story. The MC plays it safe and goes with the flow most of the time but somehow it's interesting. Overall, a pretty good novel .Worth a read, if nothing else, it's not westernizied so it gets 5 stars.