The writing is so unbearable to read but no offense. Please rewrite the story to a more readable format so that other readers can understand what you are trying to convey.
I like it.
Also 9 review pains my soul.
So here is your tenth.
Keep it up author.
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It’s alright... I just don’t like the harem collecting that seems to be going on here and before you attack me, look I know it’s a comedy and it makes fun of it and well yes I did laugh but to me it’s kinda meh to be honest in terms of story plotting. I just don’t like where it’s going and to me at least a far superior comedy cultivation novel would be the likes of I might be a fake cultivator and the cultivation chat group which both have quite the interesting characters and well of course even more amazing comedy. So yeah that’s my opinion here and my review thanks for reading.
This needs to be in the voting pool! The quality and story of this novel is unlike any other chinese "occupation" novel I've read!
The pace is perfect and character development is believable.
It's more in-line with the God of Cooking or God of Music novel in terms of genre and story development. Somewhere between the two, but is way more addictive!
I repeat, this needs to be in the voting pool! Please~
Great book! (I don't know what to write)
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I'm supporting the Christian authors on this platform. Thumbs up to Taiwolily. Love the characters (most of them). God is good.
CULTIVATION REALMS (From chapter 31 for those interested)
In the 1st-rank Warrior realm, a cultivator's body will undergo a substantial change which will greatly enhance their physical strength and ability.
In the 2nd-rank Elite Warrior realm, a cultivator's skeletal system will be strengthened considerably. People who reached this realm will be able to easily shatter a wooden table with their fists.
In the 3rd-rank Crusader realm, their digestive organs will be further enhanced. When one reached this realm, they would only need to eat food once every three days. Their internal injuries will also heal at a much faster time.
The 4th-rank Knight Crusader will allow a cultivator to manipulate the true essence in their bodies adeptly. They can then use true essence to strengthen their attacks by more than several times.
In the 5th-rank Spirit realm, a cultivator mind will be enhanced further. This will make it easier for them to wield their true essence and they could even possibly create a skill that could produce the elements of nature. (Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, etc.)
In the 6th-rank King realm, a cultivator will be able to naturally wield the elements of nature with the use of their true essence. An expert of such caliber can create a fireball, wind blade, earth spike, etc.
In the 7th-rank Emperor realm, a cultivator can glide through the air for a brief moment and they were also able to wield a much stronger force of element.
In the 8th-rank Divine realm, a cultivator can manipulate his true essence to enable himself to fly in the air. Their strength is also more destructive and their lifespan will reach up to more than three hundred years.
In the 9th-rank Saint realm, a cultivator will have no more need for food, water, and sleep. They can simply nourish their bodies with true essence. An expert of such caliber can shatter small mountains...
In the 10th-rank God realm, a cultivator can freely command the elements of nature. If they want it to rain, then rain it shall be. But the people Nuar barely knows anything about the legendary realm.
this is the most boring book that I have read in webnovel.Maybe like his/her story the writer is checking if the readers can hold until the end.
1- too many theory explanations about everything.
2- is like reading a test book.
3- I can not find a point that was entertaining
It had a confusing start and for me it only got more confusing. This novel has great potential it's not 'bad' it's just not to my certain tastes in a novel.
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Liked this one better. Earlier novel was more of a monologue or talking to bots. this time, it feels better laid out. waiting for more.
Good work