You ever watch DBZ, where one fight spans 10 episodes? This novel is similar, it tells a decent story once you get past the irritating start, but there is just too much filler. Author needs to stop rephrasing everything and just get to the point. Cut down on the unnecessary backstory, you don’t need that much world building. Really difficult to read and get into it.
Since last novel got bummed imma copy my last one here.Note: THE AUTHOR WILL TRY TO LOWER UR EXPECTATIONS OF THE STORY BUT IT IS A FUCKIN.G GEM. Writing quality- I didn't see any problems with it, it seemed to flow when i was reading. Stability of updates- It's every day so it's great but it could become better if he released like 3 a day(jk) the story is so good u want more updates. Story Development-Fuckin.g 10/10 it isnt slow paced but its at a rate where that it feels like the events are flowing like flipping to the next page. Character design- All the characters in the book are actual ppl with personalities and reasons to do things not like he's evil so kill him but it explains why he/she is evil or commits acts that warrant the label evil put on it. World background- Simple words for u, there is no info dump but small bits that u can start putting together in ur head while reading. I HIGHLY recommend it. It's also from the first POV and sometimes changes POV so we can know what the other characters are doing.
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As of around 20 chapters in, I am really enjoying it. The starting concept confused me a bit, but once the story got into the meat, it greatly improved. I really like the concept so far, and I am excited to see where it goes.
Wowww..I feel like I'm a baby when I read this hehe ... I was really surprised if I experienced it hihihi ...Recommended!!⊂(◉‿◉)つ⊂(◉‿◉)つ⊂(◉‿◉)つ⊂(◉‿◉)つ⊂(◉‿◉)つ⊂(◉‿◉)つ⊂(◉‿◉)つ