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Love the world shame its ruined by the stupid MC Stupid so damn stupid painful to read i keep having to skim read the stupidy making same stupid choices, Why becasue im stupid becasue im stupid i dont do this until im about to die rather than before i wont allocate points why becasue stupid
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Imma drop this srry....There are ALOT of problems hereImma just state a few 1st if he sealed himself he should have alot of resources in his ring that can heal him easily since he was at the so called apex of the cultivation world2nd if he was unsealed because of a calamity doesnt that mean he would have no chance if there was a calamity? Given the current state hes in3rd If he was sealed that would have mean he should still have his amazing powers ._.Thats all cause if i continue i might drown u guys with the issues.......(not kidding)Welp definitely a nope for me if u guys still want to continue its up to you...*dont take offense author this is.based on my view*
MC had a fiancée, she was possessed by a system OR went crazy and is using telekinetic powers to drive her ex fiancé crazy. It's a horror book in both forms. Poor author must have been influenced by dreams with cthulu and didn't even realize, he still thinks he's safe when in fact he's already had his mind stained with the madness of the great ancients.
one of the best verses . I love everything from character development to plot and female leads too. ..
This is one nice novel, spelling mistakes aside, it shows political intrigue without the need of arrogantly say it’s that like lesser authors would
Love it! The main caracter is crazy genious whom always solve his problems in the most unexpected way. AND IT'S FUN!!! Yet the other carracters are not pushovers and i think more of them will get good background.
Amazing! Probably one of the best stories I have ever read. I must say I can't wait for future story development of this Novel. Thank you for this amazing novel.
Keep up the good work.... also there is some typo that you missed but all is well still good to read though. ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
