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Nice book i just can't help but get addicted to itThe author does have a good idea but please update regularly Please update this book i wanna read
For some reason my old review got deleted so i ll repeat myself. The novel starts out fine but at one point the author decides to have the mc suddenly become a killer(to add drama or smthin i guess). Completely kills the whole atmosphere the novel built up and ruins the story. No idea why there are so many positive reviews because the last time i wrote this the novel was rated well below 4*.
Only 1 chapter so far so read this with a grain of salt.writing Quality: 4/5. It'd be perfect, but the author doesn't get her/his right and it took me out my reading flow at least 4 times. Updates: New novel. Can't judge yet.Story: 5/5. Sounds like an interesting virtual reality world will soon unfold before us. Character Design: Both characters are distinct and interesting. Their hair, build, etc. are described well.World Background: 5/5. We know what world they're in and where the MC stands in it. Advice for author: Read up on possessive his/her.
Dear Author-sama,Yo, I got some comment for you to read here.You should have just made it a xianxia with MC that got some kind of power related to 'programming reality' instead of making a Minecraft Fan-Fic... I mean, what is the use of Command Block if it is not used like in Minecraft? When I first saw this story, I was expecting you to make our MC a law-defying entity, which can defy the law of physics like making a block of dirt float or something similar.It would have been really cool if you can make it like that and make our MC use the 'physics defy' using the Command Block. Oh yeah, Minecraft is all about gathering resource to increase the player's capabilities such as strength and defense so it is highly recommended to make some customization there.I won't say your work is good, but I won't say it is bad either. Pretty much not bad, hehe.But well, what do you think?By the way, DON'T DIE ON ME!!!-Sincerely A Certain Homo SapiensP.s. exp
Good Novel, KEEP UPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I'm a bit stupid becoz I read the book, ranted to my friends about how good it is, but forgot to review it. *facepalm* Well u got it, this book is the perfect escape from all the usual sappy stuff u see in WN. Well not that I mind it, becoz I even read it but U know wat I mean. Thank u author-sama for writing this fanfic.
Ive read the book from start to finish took me 24hrs or longer Idk at this point. But I’ve finally found the time to rate. And overall it’s the best book out there in this app. This book has everything and the story keeps me hooked. Props to Mr. Author for his time and work to make this novel turn out the way it is.
i cant say that its slow start but its progressing really well. you easily get attached with tess. what made me read this is about the forbidden romance tag. lol. anyway. this is 3rd person pov so i like it. cant handle 1st person pov. keep it up.
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The novel is beautiful. I like the characters and their growth. The world is also well structured and as the story progresses it becomes more and more interesting.
As always this author delivers 10/10/10/20/100 xD So many good pieces I could explode! Now exploring the villain world! Noah is an interesting character best one yet!
