MC is very stupid and hypocritical which hurts the story massively. -spots a SSS technique, doesn't want to learn it because it might be hard to cultivate while at this point has a system that speeds up cultivation and is making decent money to buy materials to help cultivate even faster, he doesn't understand the rarity of SSS techniques even though the dude has lived in the world for over 20 years and received an education there, I assume he believes that all high tier cultivation techniques are common or something.-refuses any help from his online GF but will happily receive a SECOND SSS technique from a literal stranger he met twice at that point. -believes initially that the FL is stupid/crazy when she purposely does a bad deal to give him money for free by wanting to buy a 20 dollar sword for 10k from him. He is also very antagonistic towards her while she has been relatively kind to him overall. -goes on a spiel about status, power, money doesn't matter for love to encourage a fellow teacher to get a gf but actively refuses to meet his online gf due to her being way stronger then him.
Why did Qidian hire this translator? Some MTLs are better than this and to think that this is already a premium novel is just disappointing. It seems like the translator is not even trying at all. Crappy chapters with chinese character not translated just to boost word count is the lowest any translator can go. Another great novel ruined by greed.
Came here b/c I saw author recommended this from his other story. Right off, I'm loving it writing quality is great, stability of updates, uhh idk but I assume it's going to be great also, story development, awesome so far and I can't wait for more. Character design, I love how the author is making the zombie smarter and smarter as it goes on it's adventure. Honestly don't know too much about world background right now, only a few details based off what people say, but the world also seems pretty cool. so, 5-star, 4-star, 5-star, 5-star, 4-star, but because I haven't really seen enough of the story to make a super detailed review, and am really liking it I'm just going to give everything a 5-star. Once this gets to 20 chapters I will make a more detailed review, keep doing good work author!!!
Got to the last updated chapter just to give it a chance, I really liked the plot but it was poorly executed. Author does not explain the overall limitation on the MC and randomly throws them in out of the blue with no warning. Main character has no understanding of people, he randomly blunders through things trying to act cool but never considers the consequences. How he can gain respect for the way he executes his plans and wastes resources on things not needed for many chapters is poor planning. His overall powers are poorly explained and with 78 chapters you would expect to see him in the mid 30s level wise, he is still in the teens and that disappoint me. His stats also seems not to reflect what was written down in early chapters unless I have the timeline mixed up in my head. 50 days would equal 150 stat points from his passive ability, this seems really slow progress time scale but fast unending action when looked at what has been accomplished in short span of time. No time to consolidate all his gains and it just seems poorly planned out. Worth reading for people who can live with the plot holes, unrealistic MC and weird relationships.
The writing and editing started out strong in the first 20 chapters or so, after that the writing quality dropped by quite a bit. The MC is a fairly solid of slightly boring character, he doesn't show the typical arrogance of an OP character at all; at the same time, he doesn't seem to have much personality beyond him being hardworking. So far there is very little detail as to the state of the city MC lives in, let alone the greater world. It wasn't until mid-20s I believe that it was said the wilderness was even an issue for these superhumans.
Lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Sentence construction is also not great. So 2 for Writing quality.Not sure about the updating stability as I don't follow the novel...Look as far as the novel goes apart from the writing, is very avarege. The OCs are mostly generic and the mc is basically templated. I feel like there also some developments wich are unlikely but that can be glossed over by this just being a fantasy novel of that style and the world is obviously so that's still good even though there issue's when comparing the logic of characters and their abilities to the original world.
This novel just has enough details to keep you interested to know what happens next. It's not climatic at all I'm over 100 chapters in and there's nothing that really makes you go "OMG that.was amazing. It's good enough to pass time. I'd give this a 5/10
good book it would be great if they do not discontinue
Spending so much money reading this book. like it has no ending.
any and everything that wasn't copied in its entirety is utter trash , all of the peaks of this filthy ripoff are from other books , and when he tries to write on his own it's filthy like what just happened with Helen , I can't fathom how foolish the writer expects us to be to be enjoying the repeat
The symbolism in this opening is so rich I could write an essay. The robot delusion. This isn't just a quirky character detail—it's the central metaphor for the entire story. Jiang Li convinced himself he was a machine because machines don't feel pain. Machines don't get hurt when their father beats them. Machines don't have to wait for people who never come back. The 'hard, indestructible shell' Ye Cheng describes is exactly what Jiang Li built to survive childhood trauma. And Duan Zhihan spent years trying to reach the boy beneath that shell, only to realize too late that the shell was all that was left. The birthday cake. Every year, Duan Zhihan sent one. Six years of silent devotion, delivered through pastry shops in foreign cities. And Jiang Li—never thanked him, never showed emotion, but kept every single one. The cake becomes this symbol of love that can't be spoken, of care that can't be received. It's the thing between them that was never acknowledged but always present. The photograph. Oh God, the photograph. It falls like a shield. It takes the burning beam so Duan Zhihan doesn't have to. It turns to ash rather than let him be hurt. This is Jiang Li even in death—protecting the person he loves, sacrificing himself without being asked, without saying a word. And the fire itself. Destruction, yes, but also purification. The old life burns away so the new one can begin. Duan Zhihan steps into the flames holding that photograph, and emerges in a different time, a different moment, with a second chance. The title of this novel—whatever it is—needs to capture this: love that survives death, promises that outlast time, and the desperate hope that maybe, just maybe, we can go back and do it right.
I’m really disappointed with the story now, why did the author suddenly change the story