It has nice introduction and its' set in a world different from the usual novels and I like the plot
Another masterpiece from SoraHana. the world background and the character development are top-notch. I'm satisfied with her storytelling. This story can be read independently: Hua'er, the number one assassin, wakes up from her coma and has to infiltrate Nan Family to fulfill her last mission. This is the premise of the story. Heartbreaking moments when we came to know how she became who she is.
Good story author. Just a little action missing. You should take some ideas from story ‘Peace Online- India’ for warfare and tactics. And how a king should command .
Bro i suggest you to improve plot development well. Because its kinda messy, i cant follow the plot at all, so im kinda lost..overal great story so far..good job
the MC is garbage, he acts like a complete doormat and has pretty much no solid personality to speak of, his so called "companions" are just a ****ty fairy that treats him like crap and like the slave he is, while dodging any consequences and in fact getting rewarded for being ****ty, and a "sidekick" that's constantly getting influenced by the fairy to also treat him like ****. neither of their actions ever seem consistent or coherent and the fact that we're basically forced to watch this wimpy MC getting used for labor gets really old really fast. ALSO, his supposed "guide" consistently hides or conceals information and useful things from him simply because she "can" or because she's scheming behind his back. of course, the MC can or wont do anything about this so whats the point in reading this novel about a worthless character no one cares about being abused by other worthless characters no one else cares about.
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Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde.This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
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