The phone i use to write this is busted and bearly works but i dont rember my credentials to trasfer my account over to a new phone so whem this phone works ill post and in the mean time ill keep trying to get my acount transfer
The writing quality is not bad. I loved the prologue and the intro. It was intense and heart-wrenching. But you should write "I am" instead of just writing "am..."The characters were interesting too. You did made effort to introduce each character individually, giving them more depth. I liked the flashbacks of some characters which showed their depressing past, as it made them more 'real'.You are doing great, and I'm sure you can improve even further! ?
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When an unemployed person occupies a rare card that most pro players are looking for, this really caught my attention. Since I have read just a few chapters, I found it interesting since the prologue. This novel is what I am looking for, hope it will be fun til the end!
