Author reporting for duty !I made this realistic novel since I need a break of the fantasy novel I'm currently writing (Half-Giant Time Traveller). Read the description to know more about the novel.Anyway I write this for fun in my spare time. If you have a suggestion please write a constructive one. That is more appreciated than any cheer/hate review. Anything to make me a better author is appreciated.Cheers and enjoy!
World building is good. Kind of hard to understand different words and culture at times. Also there is romance but dont think of good, caring romance. Its more of hoping the women will breed his children and thats it. MC isnt some hero. I would call him a Villan actually. He uses everyone around him to accomplish his goals. He has no Rremorse for other orcs or anyone that im aware of. Still a solid read so far just pretty slow at times but still interesting.
The storyline seems interesting, the book will become more solid if you give the characters more depth. Keep up the good work and the book more unique.
Dear author, I so wanna start reading the book, however, that 'taking a break' bugs me so annoyingly. I don't wanna be left on cliffhangers, so please start UPDATING it ASAP!!!thankin' you.
five star review because:1. It's a good novel2. The author is nice guy whom I have had the opportunity to get to know through discord. 3. Read point 1 a hundred times.
The story is really confusing at the start. The like many game type system it all so suffers from unbalance and not really fair. Annoying stupid Mc like always.
Please kindly help create more chapter on this stories I really appreciate the time you spent on bringing it up please I just can't wait to get more details on the story
Growing up video games has always been something that I have always loved even when I didn't read many video game novels, but this is one of the best that I may have come across. I am absolutely in love with this book.
Keep up the good work a very good read so far will add another review later down the line. Happy to see that it is not your typical starting point and adding different world cultures in it.
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Hidden gem. It is interesting. I love it. Just saying what i want. Hope this will not be drop. Keep up the good work author. 5 star.
Really good story.Love the mc , love the characters, love the interactions.I really want to see how it will play out.Definitely a good read.