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Interesting read with a clear premise based on an alternate world. The MC is over powered but limited by both circumstances and environment. Though the characters are not overly well developed, they still draw attention and not completely clichéd. The storyline and plot is entertaining and writing is well paced. If you like a well balanced novel, this one is a good read.
Story started of great at first, aside from the fact that the mc is an absolute moron and one of the dumbest people I’ve read about.After his ability got upgraded to special grad the story got worse, his ability should upgrade every ability he absorbs to special grade at least, but he found multiple monsters with normal skills which he already has but since his ability should upgrade them to special which it doesn’t btw, makes it very dump for me. Also after the upgrade the normal monster seem to have the very same skills in a Rotation again and again there a very few to none at all new skills from normal monsters and it’s pretty unrealistic that mutants in the early level have so many different abilities but mutants at higher level have only a few and many have none at all.Also the dark continent ark (at least to chapter 234) is very boring for me.
loved it.I had wanted to read a good litrpg for long, and this one seemed good.
i have read more than 100 chapters and this book is weirdly wholesome with weird characters lol ... it is not one of those where mc is dark type mentality so give this a chance and atleast read more than 60 chapter
So far the mc has barely shown a depiction of pride he has been trying lay low until caught and while I like that he isn't one to make stupid decisions off one person saying something him letting people that clearly hate him benefit from him is stupid. The villian tag is blatantly wrong which personally isn't bad if you go in not expecting one. The story development isn't bad but I wish I knew more of what was going on at this point all I know is that he plans to abandon his family so he's not tied into that stuff why no clue from what I've read it seems he would benefit more from staying with them and it's hard to understand his pov if nothing is explained. Also it seems a big part of the story is them dying and starting over but so far I'm not sure if that's gonna happen.....
My favorite novel, really like all caracters , world building and the battles
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The story has a good concept. With people studying Laws and becoming stronger, this whole idea has a huge scope for development.But author has competely messed it up. His character goes from some Justice League type Hero to a guy who will kill anyone within 10-20 chapters. He happily demands money using intimidation. And honestly, I have no problem with it. But so fast? What about inner conflict? What about character development? His personality transition? Nope, nada. One moment he is talking about loving a girl because she is interesting, few chapters later he kill her without any remorse because she insulted him. What? Like honestly?Next is the character. Robotic. Idiotic. He just goes on and on, no plans, no dreams and no personality. Heck, we don't even know how does he looks. What does he likes. His secret dream. Why does he want to get stronger. Nothing.Above all, their is no planning in what he chooses. If you are given knowledge of all the things in your previous world, why not go with Quantum Forces, Energy, etc. Quite tough? What about gravity? Physics? Nuclear physics? But what he chooses? Cloud, fog, rain...Anyway, it's authors personal choice but I wouod have liked to see some preplanning. Some thought in choosing your futures.The cultivation system. It's weird. It's broken in a bad way.I can't describe it in any other way. Law difficulty and power makes no sense. Like Low God of Crow? What the hell did he study to achieve mastery of 'Crow'. And what makes a crow more complex than microorganisms which MC has chosen. And how did he merge ten laws to turn into a Crow law? Author is probably just bull****ting here. Similarly, what's long way? Law of Long way? Wtf? And believe me, it just gets weirder.And like a cherry on a top...a rotten cherry. Editing. It's hard to understand anything they say. I have read better sentences while MTLing. Their are so many problems that I don't even know where to start. Some are quite minor, but the major ones make understanding anything impossible.Author is also trying to make the world vast with a complex developed order structure and power structure. But all the laws just sound stupid and seem like an invitation for a full scale rebellion.I have many more issues but that's it for now.Author please get an editor. That itself will add a full three stars to the rating. We can ignore the rest, but poor editing just kills.of the mood to read anything.
It would be perfect if the chapters were more than 3,000 wordsI hope you will not stop writing this novelI just want more and more and more chaptersPlease hurry up and download more chaptersThanks for your hard work
great read. had my attention the whole time. definitely one that wasnt easy to put down. looking forward to some kind of further installment