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As someone coming from the undead legion, I already know that this book is going to be absolutely amazing, from reading the few chapters that is up I already love the characters.
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I followed your previous work which was written in Indonesian. Maybe the way of writing is different because of the English language. However, the storyline is still interesting and the pace is better than the previous work. Keep the spirit.
From what little I've read so far it's been a bit of a roller coaster at the .beginning and so far its been pretty funny! Hopefully this novel gets picked back up, am really sad that it feels like it might have been dropped.:'(
Really looking forward to this novel. So far, 26 chapters in, we have the male MC who gets thrown between modern China and a feudal alternate world every three days. He can't control this, nor is there any reason given for his abilities. Time runs slower in the other world though, so when he spends three days there, ten have passed in China. Which leads to some problems when he gets thrown there without warning. The MC himself is super average. His only advantage is that he can look things up when he flips back into the modern world. Which is perfect, because I was getting tired of MCs that remember minute and obsolete production processes (I'm looking at you, Release the Witch, and the MC building a steam engine from scratch). He also can only bring between worlds items that are touching him when he travels. So there's no mass influx of items in either direction, but more of an exchange of ideas. Based on the title, I expect there to be romance at some point. By the way, the empress is a badass. There's no indication of a harem, but unfortunately you never know.
translation are so bad so many he to she, and translator doesnt seem to get this is why webnovel suck. this kind of quality and they want us to pay. you can have
I loved the how the author introduced the background of MC before the transmigration! I hate when authors start the novels with the MCs already in full swing and not even caring about their past lives. In this novel the MC morn for his past life but he also had a closure for his past life. I also loved the character descriptions.Specifically AURORA AND AYIA I LOVE YOU GIRLS.
author i hope you can finish this story .i am huge fan of world building and business management ❤️.
This a Xianxia novel that's labeled as a game novel. All the characters in no way treat the game like a game. These players react more like cultivators and the game developments in no way act as a game more like another world or realm. Which is cool if the Author even tried to hide the whole 'this isn't a game' idea. Not to mention the Author has a horrible sense of pacing, 30 levels in one whole day? Huge world quests on launch day? 10:1 time dilation between game and reality? Unless this game world is infinite than players will run through this game in a year or two if not less. Honestly, it's just so ridiculous, if you want to write a Xianxia novel, write one, don't try and pass it off as a game novel just because he logs out once in almost 200 chapters.
Amazing ...finally you are back ...
more chapters please
I enjoyed this story so much. I hope that you write a part 2. I want to know about the Betas and Luna getting her powers.
