The story is quite intriguing, and it’s definitely got me hooked. Chapter 4 was my favorite; the flow was amazing, and the steady rise in action had me craving more! I’d love to see this story fleshed out character-wise and setting-wise, but I guess we’ll find out more the farther we go!
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OKAY, it seems my journey ended here. Thank you for the story. I guess I don't have a choice but to accept it since I don't like your decision. It was very enjoyable to read. Thank u?.
the novel is amazing, I highly recommend it for readers.
I deeply respect author for being consistent, still on the road to the same goal, added to it but it's basically the same, the world building and it's elements didn't just change halfway through, anything that was added meshed with whatever was already there.Most of the stuff I started out liking and reading around the time i started this i basically already dropped.This one stood tall. It reminds me of the old stuff like i shall seal the heavens and the desolate era, and stuff from that time. Where writers actually gave a shit about their work, instead of just writing for the sake of writing. Back then it took getting halfway through a thousand chapter book to even start to see inconsistencies, and the chapters were long, min 2000 words, some going all the way to 10000 and beyond.These days the problems start from the first chapter, the gimmicks and themes are the main plot devices, systems, golden fingers are the actual story and most of the time they're not even well thought out.I miss having face slapping situations that actually made sense. But i digress it's good author, thank you and i know it's not done and it might get worse but for now i am thankful and so i thank you.currently following closely 1400+ as i post this
I have somewhat mixed feelings about this novel. This novel had a great idea, and for the most part the plot was pretty good. However a few things didn't make much sense.So first off, the main character. He has lived in the void for trillions of years. It was stated his lost his sanity and regained his sanity multiple times. Putting aside the fact that humans trapped in a void for trillions of years would likely never regain their sanity, when he gets out of the void is where the problems start. When the main character eventually is reincarnated as a human, despite what was mentioned previously he still has quite a bit of emotions. He is not really a "cold calculating" as initially described, he is empathetic but kills to get to his goals. The problem with this, he has literally lived in the void for a indeterminate amount of eons, and has zero emotional defects? I'm at chapter 72, and he quite frankly has perfect sanity, with no emotional defects. Which, again, makes no sense. As for the side characters? We have antagonist #1 - 10, and useless girl who stays by the main character's side #1 and #2. He keeps a annoying energy parasite next to him for no good reason, despite it endangering him quite a bit. Also, as much as I love unforgiving worlds where the main character barely survives, this just isn't it. Literally everyone the main character meets trys to kill him at some point, it's kinda exhausting to read. I swear theres large swaths of people who will try and kill him just for the giggles. The plot in general kinda sucks. The main character wants to learn how to use mana more efficiently, so instead of taking the short way to go to the mages association to learn, he takes the long way. (He could've revealed he has a mana core to be taken there straight away, but instead he didn't and now has to walk 5000 miles across various places with next to 0% survival rate.) Why did he do this? Because it might give too much attention to him. Which I personally find laughable, considering how much attention he has gotten so far, I doubt revealing a mana core will change anything.Furthermore, the writing quality is sub-par, even for this site. Theres a lot of run-on sentences and a ridiculous amount of grammatical errors. Grammarly could've fixed the majority of mistakes. The conversations the main character has are kind of awkward, I can't really anyone actually saying this without being extremely cringy.Overall, a good idea, and it had a good plot outline, but failed the execution miserably. Writing quality, story development, and character design fall short. World background is only average.
We both walk on dark hallway, the light of lamp just make it creepier. But i like it.
There were also two other patients lying on the next two beds of mine. They shouted at me—
Malign? The eyewitnesses were already here, and he still wanted to fight on? Must she get Tao Xinyue to come over and have a direct confrontation?
Fil was having the most stone serious face one could ever imagine, but for a different reason that one might think.
„Oh, shit. He is doing it again!