Good pacing, storyline and worldbuilding. I really like it
I like the character built up, especially elyria? I hope to see more heart wrenching backgrounds
Write faster bro, your book is great. Pls for the love of God don't kill the father until he has another child that can fully use the power of the Solaris constellation
Not bad. Waiting for next chapters. It'll be Legendary. Great for a beginner. Getting ready for the next chapters. Rating: 9/11 ??????
so far I enjoy the story, i will keep reading it
perfection 10/10........................
Thanks for checking out my book! I would love know what others think of it. I'm leaving a review on it to give out some additional information in case the synopsis didn't convince you.The story takes place in a fictional world where there are others who can gain powers as well but not through the means of trials. They gain them through training or contracts with either heavenly or demonic beings.The main character, Damien, was born with a debilitating condition in a harsh world. This made him a victim of many acts of unnecessary bullying. Due to this, one day he is tragically killed in an accident caused by his usual bullies but death is not the end for him.He was offered a chance for power and with it an opportunity to reshape his life. He accepted the offer and underwent a series of trials to gain this reward.The trials are based on the seven sins. Envy, gluttony, greed, sloth, lust, pride, and wrath. Each one brings him a unique ability that he must learn to discover or command.He struggles as he goes challenge after challenge, pushing both his physical and mental state beyond their limits and attaining new bizzate abilities with each new trial he passes.When it gets too much for him or he feels beaten he relies on his anger to push him forward. He manages to stand up due to all his hate and overwhelming desire to come back and spite everyone who did him wrong in the past.Hope you all find this story an entertaining read!
Very good story wood recommend. Hope the author
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Unique. I was looking for such novels. Great job till nice
amazing book ... and is very attractive
A well written story with great character development and world building. And I love that you mass publish your chapters❤️