Sometimes I feel repulsive reading this novel ... But I keep enduring it until the end
Ye, this is actually one of the novels I really like and might even go rereading whenever I don't have anything else to read. But the translation just ruined everything
Collection should be collect on ch. 33. I know there's a lot more to unpack about the grammar but that just stood out to me and I couldn't ignore it.
One of the worst novels. Do not read. The FL is stupid and weak. Her radiance and fame on her previous life seemed to have disappeared sfter she being SX. The ML is a rapist and very cruel. If they end up together, its just a masochistic love story. The ML ordered the FL to be whipped till she was bleeding, tied to his carriage, walked for miles while he sits in a carriage and so on. The ML is the epitome of all the things smart women abhorred. He is a trash oh a man and should perish. Whoever wrote this novel us sick. Or a psycho.
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Great story so far. I binge read it to the current chapter and so far it's very promising. There are the occasional grammar errors but nothing substantial that will mess up your read. Ultimately it's a smooth read and everything flows quite well. The story so far looks good but I think some people might take issue with the MC who has memories from his prior life and his new life who can at times appear like a dunse. However I can easily see how that's beginning to change. The best part of this novel so far for me has to be the design of the characters and how they interact. The author did a brilliant job on that part. The novel is still at the beginning so not much has been on world background aside from a few things. Overall great novel so far. Highly recommend. I hope you continue with it author and best of luck.
pls update on time.......I wish I could read the book in one sitting ????
I was wonder is he like Ares doesnt hide his strength and ruthless enough to kill his enemies and manipulate them
Posting here as I grew to be liking this novel. Many thanks for the author that's writing this, I find it very amazing in every sense. I am having a great time reading it.
This story is utterly trash. The author has literally no talent for writing. He contradicts himself in every chapter, can’t decide what power system he wants to use, and cannot make his characters make logical decisions.
The Good: The editing rarely makes mistakes and the writing is straightforward. The story moves along at a pace that laughs at the slow pace Chinese stories love. The author seems to have a vision and is writing it. The Bad: We're definitely in wish fulfillment territory. The thing that seemed to take the longest was the MC getting his system. The MC borders on leaning on his plot armor and the 4th wall intentionally. Everything is kind of canned otherwise. Dateless loser? Quest to get one. Best friend shows up and immediately offers up his sister. Lots of things are explained by info dumps. The system is so helpful that the MC doesn't have to be smart. Multiple times the MC is in danger or is greedy and with a smile and raise of the hand, the system or the world bend to his will. I have put food effort into reading this, but even I have to stop after a few chapters to give myself a break. I've never seen MC struggle to overcome something and by now, I'm kind of tried of looking.The characters are uninspired. The author, as far as I got, worked too hard showing us that their talent was wasted telling instead of showing. Most of the author's weaknesses are in their interpersonal and cultural understandings.The greatest moment I encountered in the story, where the author was showing their spark, was when the FL spoke French. It was an opportunity for many things, but many, if not all, were wasted. The MC apparently spoke French too, a dead language, in the future, in an area with predominantly Chinese names. It could have been a moment to show the MC having a gap in his knowledge, and thus himself, or to use his skills or the system to overcome. Instead the MC was too cool for human weakness and was perfect. Yay.My final conclusion is that while I look forward to the growth of this author, I'll be looking forward to their next book, rather than more chapters of this one. Whomever their editor and proofreader is, they have my praise and I hope the author realizes the blessing they have.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.