So far from what I have read up to chapter 49, this story is above average. The mc is not perfect nor allowed his past problems to allow him to be evil. He is a flawed character, to which in life is more realistic than most stories i have read on here. I think being able to relate to a mc actions in a story is very impressive compared to most of the stories which are slanted in one way or the other to a very bad degree. The only small problem I have seen thus far is the author has a small problem with the "him" "her" flip flop sometimes. the author seems to have fixed most of it as of chapter 49.
I came in to this book having a great expectations and I came out of this book thinking that the author needed to proof read cause what they got now has to be fixed . Ive read the first few chapters and i still think I have the right to say the author needs to fix the book . The author instead of having the mc tag along with the bronze knoght should have had him follow along with the girl and so he could grow along with the girl and get more powerful with her so that would be good character Development . Also the mc is so attached to the firl even though he hardly knows who she is He is idiotic and I hate it . I recommend Anyone who stumbles upon this review to not read the book this book looks good at first glance . But it turns into an absolute Dumspter fire later and if you think im just trash talking Go look at other reviews Its a 1/10 i recommend you to find a better novel instead Of this
This novel reminds me a lot the WH40k universe, there isn't blood and gore yet but the vibes from the first chpters is the same. It's dark and the ambiance is heavy, fortunately the mc thoughts are here to keep us occupied and just by being able to know what the mc is thinking makes us more comfortable. I put this novel in my list and I'll definetely come back when more chapters are released.
I love this story! I really recommend it! And I hope the author has time to finish the story!..........................................................
This novel was one of a kind. The kind that inspires me to write more. The grammar, well let's just say more wisdom and knowledge to the author to create perfect English grammar. The same also with me ?. So this review was to encourage the author not to give up. The best is yet to come and I know you will become the best version of yourself. Kudos and good luck! Awesome story so far!
the progressing suspense is quite interesting and characters are literally mysterious, its a good story line and I would love to see the end
I like the story, like the directions its going but i would love to get more release per day . Would be waiting for more updates thanks for the story !
I don’t understand it. This novel is game/system based, and yet I haven’t even stopped reading it since I found this book this morning. I am already at chapter 100, and I am wanting to read so much more of it. It flows well, hardly has unnecessary exposition, has great dialog and action sequences. It is a well thought out book with great pacing. Good job! No! GREAT JOB!
Hello this the Author . Thanks for reaching this fanfic . Try to donate some power stone As we will do a mass release of whole 20 chapter for every 100 stones
Bro this novel is hilarious the mc gets all the cliches of hahah you are ugly clown and osv. he gets ONE haircut and then They star faening over the man like chill. If you read this dont take it seriously and just enjoy yourself while reading. Still no yandere after chapter 47
Its so bad. No but really. First of all it is really slow. And even til chapter 110 he only has 1 skill. You hear me, 1 skill. Mc is really naive, ignoring his masters opinion etc. He has no guts, it’s like when people humilated him, he just smiles and ignore it. No grudge or anything. In other words a p**sy. He died and takes over a ugly person. Then joins a sect and learns alchemy. Yeah alchemy the most boring thing in every cultiavrion novel. I read this because some people said it’s good but don’t waste your time. They say read til chapter 200, because that’s when it’s gonna be good.You fr rn? Read 200 chapters with no plot, a mc with no guts, 1 skill, a ugly body, alchemy and slow pace.
So far, l enjoyed the novel so much. lt's fun reading the novel, about the character design, l love it. World Background is great, keep up the good work author.